Wo Koun Tha...Koyi to Hey

[muskaan]

Re: Wo Koun Tha...Koyi to Hey

meri samajh mein nahi ata mein tum sai kya kahoon kanwal jab bhi likhti ho mere paas alfaaz hi nahi bachtai hain tareef kai :) ye bhi bauhat k hubsurat ghazal hai aur ye alfaaz bhi kam hain tareef kai liyai :)

khush raho :)

[:Qassim:]

Re: Wo Koun Tha...Koyi to Hey

Aaj phli baar kuc h apney liye bhi likha hey....so yahan share kar rahi hoon :rose

Aadaab o Tasleemaat

Mohterma Kanwal sahiba bohot hii mufarid andaaz e bayaan hai aapka ... Aapkii kaaviSh pehlii baar paRh raha hooN, bohot pasand aa'ee ... Umeed kerta hooN aa'inda bhii aapko paRhna naseeb hoga

Agar pehlii baar yeh ghazab ka likha hai aap ne to maiN experience k saath kya kuch likh sakhaiNgii iss ka andaza bhii naheiN laga sakta :)

Daad qubool keejiay :rose

Qassim Mirza :Qassim:

[WorThless]

Re: Wo Koun Tha...Koyi to Hey

MASHALLAH ... ba kamal likha jab bhi likha jis key liye bhi likha aur jo bhi likha ..!! likhna asan nahi aur phir us per itna umda likhna to bilkul bhi nahi ALLAH tumharey khayalat ko tumhari likhawat ko mazeed taqat dey Ameen share kerney ka shukriya jeeti raho khush raho sada abad raho

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Re: Wo Koun Tha...Koyi to Hey

bohat hee khoobsoorat kanwal ... hamesha kee tarhaaa :rose :rose

bohat arsay baad tumhari taraf say kuch perhnay ko mila hai... aur bohat acha laga ... thanx alot ... :phool:

bohat khush raho ... hameshaa :rose

[~*Maah Nain*~]

Re: Wo Koun Tha...Koyi to Hey

Kion dua k harf meray raigaan houtay rahay
is qadr muj say khafa, woh kon tha...koi tou hi :rose

dard k pataal main woh hath kis ka tha barha
jis nay muj ko di saza , woh kon tha....koi tou hai :rose

kanwal:X:X

kis qadar khobsorat labo lehjay main ghazal kahi...parh kar bouhat lutf aaya...aik rawan darya ki taran behti chali jati hai ghazal....aur hum b khud ko is k supurd kar detay hain...mashAllah...qalm aur fan arooj par nazr aay....Allah mazeed kamyabi day ameen.... :)

khush raho hameshaaa :rose

[ChEeNaThEgReAt]

Re: Wo Koun Tha...Koyi to Hey

wowwww.........apnay bhuuuut achi nazam likhi hai...........:)

[zain]

Re: Wo Koun Tha...Koyi to Hey

bahot khoobsurat nazam kahi hai aap ne kanwal ji,issi tarah likhti rahiye,aor shar karti rahiye,
bahot khush rahiye.

[Brijinder]

Re: Wo Koun Tha...Koyi to Hey

Kanwal,is it possible to post the poem in roman for readers like me?
Brijinder"sagar"