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Aaj phli baar kuc h apney liye bhi likha hey....so yahan share kar rahi hoon :rose
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Aaj phli baar kuc h apney liye bhi likha hey....so yahan share kar rahi hoon :rose
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Re: Wo Koun Tha...Koyi to Hey
wo kon tha jo khawahisho'n ke jurm main mara gaya
khud ko deta tha sada, wo kon tha.... koi to hai.....
jisko dekha hi nahi tha, usko sajda ker diya.....
aasmaa'n per ik khuda, wo kon tha... koi to hai ......
wahhhhhhh.... kanwal ji .. aaj arsa baad aap ko parha.. yun laga jaisay sehra main sawan barsa... lafz-o-beyaa'n ki jitni pyas thi .. bujha dali... her baar naya hi parhnay ko milta hai.. aur na sirf naya bulkay munfarid aur umdah bhi...aisa radeef pehli baar nazar se guzra.. bohat hi munfarid aur pur'asar hai ... Ghazal ke tamam ashaar.. bohat khoob hain .. eik musalsal aur mukamal ghazal keh dali ... Bohat si daad ki mustahiq hein aap .. so daad hazir hai.. Share kernay ka Behad Shukria..:rose
wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove :rose
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Re: Wo Koun Tha...Koyi to Hey
bohat shukriya farrukh :rose aap ney bohat zyada hi tareef kar diOriginally posted by withlove
hmm aik ghazal suni thi main ney FM par
dheerey dheerey tark e taluk ki waja....terey merey darmiyaan
wo koun tha..koyi to hey.............
so bas ye ghazal ajnabi shayer ki mujhey bey hadh bhayi...aur ab main ney iss par likh dala:)
bohat shukriya hosla afzayi ka khush rahyie :rose
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Re: Wo Koun Tha...Koyi to Hey
Bohut hii mushkil hey behna tumharii nazm kii tareef karna itnaa bakamal,itna munfarid,itna anokha,itna meyaarii sirf tum hii likh saktii hoo sadda khush rahoo:rose aysii hastii muskuratii aur bahimmat behnaa mujhey chaheyey:phool:
ALLAH tumheyn zindagii kii saarii khushyaan dey Aameen:roseQaffas-e-hijr mein
saansoon ka amal
jarii tou hey magar
zindagii hey kahaan
dhoondh raha hoon
sagarkhan:roseComment
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aap logo ney tahiyaa kar lia hey kia k aaj hadh sey zyada tareefain karni hey :)Originally posted by SAGARKHAN
lala bohat shukriya iss qadar hosla afzayi ka :rose khush rahyie hameysha:rose
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Re: Wo Koun Tha...Koyi to Hey
Bohat acha kalam aap ne likha hay Bohat khoob likhte rahye zabardast :)Allah
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Re: Wo Koun Tha...Koyi to Hey
bohat shukriya yaaram khush rahyie :rose :)Originally posted by YAARAM
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Re: Wo Koun Tha...Koyi to Hey
Buhat khoobsurat Buhat hi acha likha hai :rose
Kamal kar diya yaar :hug
jeeti raho khush raho sada abad raho :roseZindagi Thak Gaye ..!!
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wow buhat hee khubsuratComment
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salam.
wahhhhhhhhh..bai intahaaa khoob likha hai kanwal apne....its awesom ,..... humaisha ki tarha bohat hi zabardast /yhug
khush rahiye
kabhi kitaboN main phool rakhna...!kabhi darakhtoN pe naam likhna...!
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Re: Wo Koun Tha...Koyi to Hey
:rose bohat shukriya khuahish khush raho :)Originally posted by ~khawahish~
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Re: Wo Koun Tha...Koyi to Hey
bohat shukriya khush rahyie hameysha :rose :)Originally posted by khl
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Re: Wo Koun Tha...Koyi to Hey
so sweet just like ur name !!:rose
ALLAH aap ko khush rakhay ameen:rose
dard ka aaina toot kar so kirchion mein bikhar gaya
har kirchi mein ubhra aks phir bhi hamara hay!!!
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aslaam_u_alikam
waah bohat khub. iam speechless:)Comment
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Re: Wo Koun Tha...Koyi to Hey
/yhug bohat shukriya Mehroo :rose khush raho hameysha :) aur tum kab share karo gi meri fav ghazal ?:roseOriginally posted by kanch ki mehroo
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