~~~~shayad ....^^!

[Capt.Abdur Rehman]

uss kay nam jo dil kay buhat kareeb ho chukka ha..!:blush:

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: ~~~~shayad ....^^!

Great brother
Mubarak ho aap aik adad poet bann gay hain.
lakian aik baat kahon........................


SHAID nahi aap ko yakeen huna chayee k aap kar skaty hian..
khush rahin

[Mujahid Khan]

Re: ~~~~shayad ....^^!

bohot khoob brother, bohot achchi shaairy hai aap ki,keep it up and keep sharing with us:thmbup:

[zapk]

Re: ~~~~shayad ....^^!

Achi koshish hai.sher ali bhai,mujhay lagta hai ke kuch islah ki zaroorat hai,Zarqa ji is ghazal ko mazeed behtar bananay mein aapki madad kar sakti hain.Designing bhi achi hai,laikin is ke liyay bhi agar aap B&W pic ki bajay coloured pic choose kartay to ,mairay nazdeek,ziada behtar hota.
Taham majmooi tor per achi koshish hai.thmbup:

[Mr. Sialkoty]

Re: ~~~~shayad ....^^!

bohat khoob mere shair...bohat umda

jeetay raho mere cheetay, i mean shair :D

[musaddaq]

Re: ~~~~shayad ....^^!

:phool:very nice

[Capt.Abdur Rehman]

Re: ~~~~shayad ....^^!

Great brother
Mubarak ho aap aik adad poet bann gay hain.
lakian aik baat kahon........................


SHAID nahi aap ko yakeen huna chayee k aap kar skaty hian..
khush rahin

khail aap kay khooobsorat comments ka shukriya..!:rose

[Capt.Abdur Rehman]

Re: ~~~~shayad ....^^!

bohot khoob brother, bohot achchi shaairy hai aap ki,keep it up and keep sharing with us:thmbup:

brother thanks for ur so nice comments..!:rose

[Capt.Abdur Rehman]

Re: ~~~~shayad ....^^!

Achi koshish hai.sher ali bhai,mujhay lagta hai ke kuch islah ki zaroorat hai,Zarqa ji is ghazal ko mazeed behtar bananay mein aapki madad kar sakti hain.Designing bhi achi hai,laikin is ke liyay bhi agar aap B&W pic ki bajay coloured pic choose kartay to ,mairay nazdeek,ziada behtar hota.
Taham majmooi tor per achi koshish hai.thmbup:

aapa ..sharing pasand kernay ka aour tips daynay ka buhat buhat shukriya..!:rose

[refreshing_breeze]

Re: ~~~~shayad ....^^!

sa bohat hi khubsoorat sharing hai:thmbup:
wording dil ko chu jaaney wali hai:rose
designing bhi achi hai lekin thori si aur hard work ki zaroorat hai
overall very nice work

kya samjhe?

[Capt.Abdur Rehman]

Re: ~~~~shayad ....^^!

bohat khoob mere shair...bohat umda

jeetay raho mere cheetay, i mean shair :D

munday...teray wadiyah kissam kay comments ka buhat buhat shukriya...!:rose
tu bhi kush reh...!

[Capt.Abdur Rehman]

Re: ~~~~shayad ....^^!

:phool:very nice

pasand kernay ka buhat buhat shukriya jee..!:rose

[Capt.Abdur Rehman]

Re: ~~~~shayad ....^^!

sa bohat hi khubsoorat sharing hai:thmbup:
wording dil ko chu jaaney wali hai:rose
designing bhi achi hai lekin thori si aur hard work ki zaroorat hai
overall very nice work

kya samjhe?

Rb aap kay khoobsoorat aour hosla afzaa comments ka buhat buhat shukriya..!:rose :rose

[jia]

Re: ~~~~shayad ....^^!

nice sharing:rose
app to waqye shayer bn gay hain:)
keep it up
b happy:rose

[Z.]

Re: ~~~~shayad ....^^!

good one Ali, keep writing