* Ek Pagal Larki *

[:Qassim:]

Re: * Ek Pagal Larki *

Salaam

Saima jee bohot hii achchhii nazam kahii hai aap ne :phool:

Qassim Mirza :Qassim:

[Z.]

Re: * Ek Pagal Larki *

bohot simple aur asaan lafzon mey acha likha hai :thmbup:

[Masood]

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Allah na karey is pegal larki ko ab ki baar koi chot lagey aur ab ki baar yeh larrkhraey. Maazi ki chand batein dil per naqsh ho jati hain, jinhein mitana bohat mushakil hota hai. Magar aisey log bhi raahon mein miltey hain jo in yaadein ko khatam nahin to kam karney mein maddad zaroor detey hain.

Saima bohat pyara likha aur aaindah bhi likhein gi khushi ho gi :rose

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: * Ek Pagal Larki *

:rose

Assalam-o-Alikum WR WB

itz written by u ? ,....

FeamanAllah

['SamRazi']

Re: * Ek Pagal Larki *

Assalaam o alekum,


arey waaah kyaa baat hai , saima tum to likhnaa bhi jaanti ho humien to pataa bhi nahin thaa ek chanchal dil ki maaliq larki itni khoobsoorat kavish bhi likhnaa jaanti hai zabardast likhaa tumnien bhai waaaah dili daad qabool karo aur aayinda bhi likhti raho aur humse share kerti raho khush raho

Buhut buhut shukriya khurram, main bas wese hi kabhikabhi time pass ker leti houn :p


khush rahiyeh :)

['SamRazi']

Re: * Ek Pagal Larki *

Salaam

Saima jee bohot hii achchhii nazam kahii hai aap ne :phool:

Qassim Mirza :Qassim:

Buhut buhut shukriya Qassim :phool:

['SamRazi']

Re: * Ek Pagal Larki *

bohot simple aur asaan lafzon mey acha likha hai :thmbup:

Shukriya :phool:

['SamRazi']

Re: * Ek Pagal Larki *

Allah na karey is pegal larki ko ab ki baar koi chot lagey aur ab ki baar yeh larrkhraey. Maazi ki chand batein dil per naqsh ho jati hain, jinhein mitana bohat mushakil hota hai. Magar aisey log bhi raahon mein miltey hain jo in yaadein ko khatam nahin to kam karney mein maddad zaroor detey hain.

Saima bohat pyara likha aur aaindah bhi likhein gi khushi ho gi :rose

Sahi kaha :)

['SamRazi']

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Assalam-o-Alikum WR WB

itz written by u ? ,....

FeamanAllah

Who else :cc:

[Mehak]

Re: * Ek Pagal Larki *

bohat khoob saima :thmbup: achha likha hai...

Shayed
Phir se thokar ek khaney
phir sey dil ko rog laganey...

[hayaa_n]

Re: * Ek Pagal Larki *

Saima ji aap ki ye nazm bhi bouhat khoobsurat hay.aap bouhat acha likhti hai'n. mujhay aap ka likha huwa read kar kay bouhat acha laga.khush rahiye aur likhti rahiye.Aameen:)

['SamRazi']

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Pasand keren ka buhut buhut shukriya Mehak aur Hayaa_n :ff:

[Dilgeer]

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U've a huge amount of talent Saima and nice to c that u r putting it in the direct direction - creation is a difficult thing, but it seems u've got the ability to make a good creation :) very nice dear keep it up :)

[hayaa_n]

Re: * Ek Pagal Larki *

Again read ki aur bouhat achi lagi...mazeed ka wait hay..umda likhti hain aap.:masha :)

['SamRazi']

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Again read ki aur bouhat achi lagi...mazeed ka wait hay..umda likhti hain aap.:masha :)

Hayaa_n lagta hai aaj kal tum kuch zada free ho jo ghoom ghoom ker dobara parh rahi ho :khi: Just kidding

Khushi hai ke tumhein pasadn aayi :rose