Aye Malal-i-Sanam

[Aik Lamha]

Assalam-0-Alaikum;

Aik aur adna si kawish... aap ki ara'a ka muntazir hoon....

[سخن ور]

Re: Aye Malal-i-Sanam

خوب جناب بهترين:)

[Masood]

Re: Aye Malal-i-Sanam

Aik Lamha sab sey pehley to main maazrat chahoon ga keh kuchh pareshaniyon ki wajah sey kuchh khoya sa raha. Aap ko is mehfil mein dekh kar bohat khushi hui, aur aap ka kalaam bohat pasand aaya. Bohat aala kaam hai keep it up :)

[Aik Lamha]

Re: Aye Malal-i-Sanam

خوب جناب بهترين:)

Thanx Janaab...

[Aik Lamha]

Re: Aye Malal-i-Sanam

Aik Lamha sab sey pehley to main maazrat chahoon ga keh kuchh pareshaniyon ki wajah sey kuchh khoya sa raha. Aap ko is mehfil mein dekh kar bohat khushi hui, aur aap ka kalaam bohat pasand aaya. Bohat aala kaam hai keep it up :)

Aray sahab Maazrat kis baat ki?
kalaam pasand kernay ka buhat buhat shukriya.. @};-

[muskaan]

Re: Aye Malal-i-Sanam

bauhat hi khubsurat nazam likhi hai moin :)

khush rahiyai aur likhtai rahiyai :)

[Aik Lamha]

Re: Aye Malal-i-Sanam

bauhat hi khubsurat nazam likhi hai moin :)

khush rahiyai aur likhtai rahiyai :)

Thanx Diya ji... .... :)

[ghurob-e-aftab]

Re: Aye Malal-i-Sanam

BUhat khoob Moin Bahi :)

khush rahoo .

[Aik Lamha]

Re: Aye Malal-i-Sanam

BUhat khoob Moin Bahi :)

khush rahoo .

thanx Aftaab..... aap bhi khush rahein...

[withlove]

Re: Aye Malal-i-Sanam

Mujh ko dukh umr-e-doraa'n ke kum hein koi ?
Jo sung ghum-e-rafta ko le ker chalo'n ?

wahhh kya hi kehnay.. bohat hi umdaah likh dala.. iss baar to ghazab ki rawani aur kahani hai .. Bohat pasand aayee aap ki ye umdaah kawish.. itni jald pyas bujhanay ka Behad Shukria.. Mazeed ka phir se intazar hai .. :rose

wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove :rose

[Mr. Sialkoty]

Re: Aye Malal-i-Sanam

itna umda likha he ke shayad mere alfaz bhi teri munasib tareef na ker paaein...bohat khoob Aik Lamhay

[Aik Lamha]

Re: Aye Malal-i-Sanam

Mujh ko dukh umr-e-doraa'n ke kum hein koi ?
Jo sung ghum-e-rafta ko le ker chalo'n ?

wahhh kya hi kehnay.. bohat hi umdaah likh dala.. iss baar to ghazab ki rawani aur kahani hai .. Bohat pasand aayee aap ki ye umdaah kawish.. itni jald pyas bujhanay ka Behad Shukria.. Mazeed ka phir se intazar hai .. :rose

wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove :rose

Thanx withlove.... hamesha ki tarhan... meri kawish say ziada aap ki ta'areef achi hay.. :)

[Aik Lamha]

Re: Aye Malal-i-Sanam

itna umda likha he ke shayad mere alfaz bhi teri munasib tareef na ker paaein...bohat khoob Aik Lamhay

Thanx Aamir..... :)

['SamRazi']

Re: Aye Malal-i-Sanam

Buhut acha likha hai Moin :rose



Khush raho :rose

[Aik Lamha]

Re: Aye Malal-i-Sanam

Buhut acha likha hai Moin :rose



Khush raho :rose

Thanx Saima...