Khiyaal-e-qurbat-e-yaar

[Capt.Abdur Rehman]

SALAM:salam:
apnay kuch jazbaat ko poetry ki soorat main samo ker aap ki khidmat main laaya hoon..!
aap ki raai ka muntazir rahoon ga..!
needy of ur prayers...!

[jia]

Re: Khiyaal-e-qurbat-e-yaar

very nice sharing:rose
kafi acha likh lia hay app nay:eye:
keep it up
b happy:rose

[Soulmate]

Re: Khiyaal-e-qurbat-e-yaar

wow nice keep it up dear

[Mr. Sialkoty]

Re: Khiyaal-e-qurbat-e-yaar

jeeta reh meri jaan murgi ke anday

jo dil chahay ker...lekin badalna nahi...nice sharing :D

[refreshing_breeze]

Re: Khiyaal-e-qurbat-e-yaar

sa bohat khubsoorat sharing ki hai:thmbup:
wording bohat pasand aayi hai :rose
designing bohat simple hai

text ki proper alignment ka khayal rakha karey jee
font size agar thora bara hota tou acha tha :mm:

anyways
very nice sharing
keep it up

[Capt.Abdur Rehman]

Re: Khiyaal-e-qurbat-e-yaar

very nice sharing:rose
kafi acha likh lia hay app nay:eye:
keep it up
b happy:rose

thaknoooo jee thankooo..!

[Capt.Abdur Rehman]

Re: Khiyaal-e-qurbat-e-yaar

wow nice keep it up dear

buhat buhat thanx dear:rose

[Capt.Abdur Rehman]

Re: Khiyaal-e-qurbat-e-yaar

jeeta reh meri jaan murgi ke anday

jo dil chahay ker...lekin badalna nahi...nice sharing :D

jiger bakri kay aaanday...tera buhat buhat shukria...! sharing pasand kernay ka..!:hathora

[Capt.Abdur Rehman]

Re: Khiyaal-e-qurbat-e-yaar

sa bohat khubsoorat sharing ki hai:thmbup:
wording bohat pasand aayi hai :rose
designing bohat simple hai

text ki proper alignment ka khayal rakha karey jee
font size agar thora bara hota tou acha tha :mm:

anyways
very nice sharing
keep it up

thanx for ur valuable comments:rose

[Mujahid Khan]

Re: Khiyaal-e-qurbat-e-yaar

bohot khoobsarat shaairy ki hai aap nay :thmbup:

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: Khiyaal-e-qurbat-e-yaar

bahoot khoob janab very nice

[Z.]

[Gul]

Re: Khiyaal-e-qurbat-e-yaar

SALAM:salam:
apnay kuch jazbaat ko poetry ki soorat main samo ker aap ki khidmat main laaya hoon..!
aap ki raai ka muntazir rahoon ga..!
needy of ur prayers...!

Buhat khoob poet wahi hai jo wo jaisay soachay wesay hee likh dey
zara b banawat na ho ...!
U DO Have germs whic a poet should have :) ....Pooray beymaar ho ja-aeyay :):lpop:

[Yaaram]

Re: Khiyaal-e-qurbat-e-yaar

Wah bhai aap to bohat acha likhte ho - mashq jari rakheiN inshALLAH - aur likhte rahein

[Ali jee]

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cute sharing alfaz ka chonu acha hey hey ................... dad qabool karo bhai ......