~*~ Tera Dard Hai... ~*~

[ShAnI]

Salam

"Qita" chand alfaz mein lambi baat kehna kafi mushkil kaam hai issi liyay meri shiri mein buhat kam tadad hai inki ... Unmein say aik hazir-e-khidmat hai ... Umeed hai mein shiri ki is form kay saath insaf ker paya hoon :rose

** HG dooston poorana hai bardasht kegiyay ga :)

[kanwal]

Re: ~*~ Tera Dard Hai... ~*~

sahi kaha k kam alfaz main mukamal bat kehna mushkil hey magar aap ney bohat khoobsurati k sath apni bat keh di heyqita bhi khoob hey aur img bhi bohat khoob hey

thanx for sharing .

[ShAnI]

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sahi kaha k kam alfaz main mukamal bat kehna mushkil hey magar aap ney bohat khoobsurati k sath apni bat keh di heyqita bhi khoob hey aur img bhi bohat khoob hey

thanx for sharing .

Kanwal sahiba buhaaaaaaaat khushi hoe apko bhe yahan dekh ker :phool:

Apki nazmon ka interzar rahay ga yahan :)

Aur buhaaaat shukriya qita pasand kernay ka

Hamseha muskurati rahiyay :rose

[ur_friend]

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bht khob kiya likha ha aur image bhi bht acha ha :good

keep it up

[ShAnI]

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bht khob kiya likha ha aur image bhi bht acha ha :good

keep it up

Shukriya meray dost :)

[muskaan]

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sahi kaha hai tum nai shani wakai kam alfaaz mein apni baat kehna mushkil hai aur tum nai bauhat khoobi sai ye kaam kiya hai :) simply beautiful :)

bauhat khush raho /yhug

[ShAnI]

Re: ~*~ Tera Dard Hai... ~*~

sahi kaha hai tum nai shani wakai kam alfaaz mein apni baat kehna mushkil hai aur tum nai bauhat khoobi sai ye kaam kiya hai :) simply beautiful :)

bauhat khush raho /yhug

Aap bhe buhat khush rahin KANJOOO Aapi

[muskaan]

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Aap bhe buhat khush rahin KANJOOO Aapi

:eek: kya hogaya hai :eek: ro kyon rahai ho :cc:

[ShAnI]

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Bas dil ker raha hai apko kyaaaa

[muskaan]

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Bas dil ker raha hai apko kyaaaa

haw hai aiwain dil kar raha hai chalo jaldi sai batao mujhe :hathora

[~*~khawab-e-gul~*~]

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Bohot acha likhtai hain app... Shuqria Share karnai ka... keep smiling :)

[WOH LARKI]

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Boht Khoob Shani. shukriya:rose

[ShAnI]

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haw hai aiwain dil kar raha hai chalo jaldi sai batao mujhe :hathora

Koi naraz ho to sar phord diya jata ahi uska kya

[ShAnI]

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Bohot acha likhtai hain app... Shuqria Share karnai ka... keep smiling :)

Buhat shukriya himmat bardhanay ka ... Keep smiling :rose

[ShAnI]

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Boht Khoob Shani. shukriya:rose

Shukriya apka bhe :P

Buhat khush rahiyay :rose