~Jaisay.....

[Aabgeena]

aik aur koshish...koi ghalti ho tau darguzar kijiyay ga..pointout ker k.:rose



chand ki madham aahat bhi ab
tanhayee ka saman liay ho jaisay

zindagi is tor nibh rahi hay
koi khud sakhta saza ho jaisay

dil ki umang o umeed per bhi
chup ka quful para ho jaisay

chahar soo bahar ki rimjhim
ehsaas phir bhi patjhar ho jaisay

aankh youn barasti hay hur pal
sawan rut main jhari ho jaisay

[:Qassim:]

Re: ~Jaisay.....

aik aur koshish...koi ghalti ho tau darguzar kijiyay ga..pointout ker k.:rose



chand ki madham aahat bhi ab
tanhayee ka saman liay ho jaisay

zindagi is tor nibh rahi hay
koi khud sakhta saza ho jaisay

dil ki umang o umeed per bhi
chup ka quful para ho jaisay

chahar soo bahar ki rimjhim
ehsaas phir bhi patjhar ho jaisay

aankh youn barasti hay hur pal
sawan rut main jhari ho jaisay

Asalaam O Alaikum

:jazak: bohot umdah kalaam hai ... MaShq e suKhan jaari rakhiay, :insha: ravaanii aur behter hotii chalii ja'aygii :phool:

Qassim Mirza :Qassim:

[La'hasil]

Re: ~Jaisay.....

Zaberdast :D


Buhat achay :D



Buhat khoob :rose


khush raho hamesha :rose

[muskaan]

Re: ~Jaisay.....

aankh youn barasti hay hur pal
sawan rut main jhari ho jaisay


bauhat hi pyari si ghazal likhi hai tum nai sada si hai magar bauhat hi achi :)

khush raho aur ab likhti rehna /yhug

[Adi]

Re: ~Jaisay.....

aik aur koshish...koi ghalti ho tau darguzar kijiyay ga..pointout ker k.:rose



chand ki madham aahat bhi ab
tanhayee ka saman liay ho jaisay

zindagi is tor nibh rahi hay
koi khud sakhta saza ho jaisay

dil ki umang o umeed per bhi
chup ka quful para ho jaisay

chahar soo bahar ki rimjhim
ehsaas phir bhi patjhar ho jaisay

aankh youn barasti hay hur pal
sawan rut main jhari ho jaisay

Waah
Bhat Khoob
Likhtay rahooo Acha likhti hooo
:rose

[Aabgeena]

Re: ~Jaisay.....

Asalaam O Alaikum

:jazak: bohot umdah kalaam hai ... MaShq e suKhan jaari rakhiay, :insha: ravaanii aur behter hotii chalii ja'aygii :phool:

Qassim Mirza :Qassim:

bohat shukriya perhnay aur hosla afzayee ka...:rose

khush rahieay...:)

[Aabgeena]

Re: ~Jaisay.....

Zaberdast :D


Buhat achay :D



Buhat khoob :rose


khush raho hamesha :rose

bohat shukriya khawahish...:D

khush raho tum bhi...:rose

[Aabgeena]

Re: ~Jaisay.....

aankh youn barasti hay hur pal
sawan rut main jhari ho jaisay


bauhat hi pyari si ghazal likhi hai tum nai sada si hai magar bauhat hi achi :)

khush raho aur ab likhti rehna /yhug

bohat shukriya perhnay aur pasand kernay ka...:)

likhti tau rahoon gi shaid share ka pata nahi....khush rahieay..:phool:

[Aabgeena]

Re: ~Jaisay.....

Waah
Bhat Khoob
Likhtay rahooo Acha likhti hooo
:rose

bohat shukriya perhnay aur pasand kernay ka...:rose

khush rahieay hamesha...:phool:

[WorThless]

Re: ~Jaisay.....

hmm bohat acha likha hey share kerney ka shukriya aur yunhi likhtey raho so tht u ll get more n more jeetey raho khush raho sada abad raho

[- aa -]

Re: ~Jaisay.....

bohat achay ... tum to chupi rustam niklein ...
bohat khush raho... hameshaa :rose aabgaindi

[~*~khawab-e-gul~*~]

Re: ~Jaisay.....

Bohot acha.. Shuqria share karnai ka.. kush rahiya.:)

[WOH LARKI]

Re: ~Jaisay.....

chand ki madham aahat bhi ab
tanhayee ka saman liay ho jaisay

zindagi is tor nibh rahi hay
koi khud sakhta saza ho jaisay

dil ki umang o umeed per bhi
chup ka quful para ho jaisay


Aabgeena aap ki yeh koshish bhi be hadd pasand aai, thanx for sharing.:phool: :rose :rose :rose

[muskaan]

Re: ~Jaisay.....

bohat shukriya perhnay aur pasand kernay ka...:)

likhti tau rahoon gi shaid share ka pata nahi....khush rahieay..:phool:

tum likho to sahi aur share to tumharai achai bhi karain gai :rose

ye thanku kis ko bola hai :hathora

[:Qassim:]

Re: ~Jaisay.....

bohat shukriya perhnay aur hosla afzayee ka...:rose

khush rahieay...:)

Salaam

Janaab achchhii cheez ko hamesha saraha jaata hai :salam:

Qassim Mirza :Qassim: