Dilkas Manzar..

[muzafarmohsin]

kuch safar aise kiey jin ki koi manzil naa thi..
aur kuch bin safar ke manzilen yun mil gaen..

jaisse phoolon se bharri Daalli girri..
aur Payaar se ...

Jholli men aisse Parri...
sab kuch Muattar ho gia..
Aur men un payaarre dilkash..
manzron men kho giaa...

---===Hafiz Muzaffar mohsin===---

[_Dard_Aashna_]

Re: Dilkas Manzar..

nice :ff:

[muzafarmohsin]

Re: Dilkas Manzar..

aap ne pasand kia.........shukria

[uzair143]

Re: Dilkas Manzar..

muzaffar sb

bout zaberdast hai aese hi likhte rahe
thanks
uzair

[khushbo]

Re: Dilkas Manzar..

very nice

[aquari]

Re: Dilkas Manzar..

kuch safar aise kiey jin ki koi manzil naa thi..
aur kuch bin safar ke manzilen yun mil gaen..

jaisse phoolon se bharri Daalli girri..
aur Payaar se ...

Jholli men aisse Parri...
sab kuch Muattar ho gia..
Aur men un payaarre dilkash..
manzron men kho giaa...

---===Hafiz Muzaffar mohsin===---

Thought bauht zaberdast haii :thmbup:
yeh ap ki apni takhleeq hai ya kisi ka kalam hai?

[muzafarmohsin]

Re: Dilkas Manzar..

Thanks a lot...bhai Jee Yeh sab Meri takhleeq Ha....Poetry Sab Meri ha

[muzafarmohsin]

Re: Dilkas Manzar..

very nice

Thanks a lot for nice Comments:rose :rose

[muzafarmohsin]

Re: Dilkas Manzar..

muzaffar sb

bout zaberdast hai aese hi likhte rahe
thanks
uzair

Aap Ka Bohat shukriyaa...Uzair sahib:rose :rose

[aquari]

Re: Dilkas Manzar..

Thanks a lot...bhai Jee Yeh sab Meri takhleeq Ha....Poetry Sab Meri ha

bhai nahi behn:blush:

v nice
ager yeh app ki poetry hai or app kia pni takhleeq hai tu iisey Naye'aShora k sec main post kejyeaa..main is ko move kr rahi hoo wahan
app abb next :insha: jub bhi kuch takhleeq karain tu wahi share kejyea gaa
waiting for more

[Soulmate]

Re: Dilkas Manzar..

hmmmmm nice

[muzafarmohsin]

Re: Dilkas Manzar..

bhai nahi behn:blush:

v nice
ager yeh app ki poetry hai or app kia pni takhleeq hai tu iisey Naye'aShora k sec main post kejyeaa..main is ko move kr rahi hoo wahan
app abb next :insha: jub bhi kuch takhleeq karain tu wahi share kejyea gaa
waiting for more

BAHNAA....Thanks Very Much..:insha: Ab Us Jagga Post Karoon gaa:rose

[muzafarmohsin]

Re: Dilkas Manzar..

hmmmmm nice

Aap kaa Bohat shukriyaa:rose :rose

[aquari]

Re: Dilkas Manzar..

BAHNAA....Thanks Very Much..:insha: Ab Us Jagga Post Karoon gaa:rose

u r :welcome:
apni takhleeq hoo tu Naye Shora main
or apni pasand ho tu bazm-e-shairi main :blush:

[muzafarmohsin]

Re: Dilkas Manzar..

ok....behnaa