Taza ghazal ...

[:Qassim:]

Salaam

Dosto aik taza ghazal aap sab kii khidmat meN paiSh ker raha hooN ... Shakeel Badauni sahab kii zameen meN kuch kehnay kii jurrat kee hai ... Shayad kisii qaabil ho!





:Qassim: qadeem log rahay jiss se duur duur
Phir kyuN na ijtinaab keraiN uss safar se ham




MuKhlis

Qassim Mirza :Qassim:


PS: Sher #5 meN jiss "magar" ka zikr kiya hai woh aik raaz hai ... Mere khayaal meN iss se zyada mera aur kuch kehna munaasib naheiN!

[withlove]

Re: Taza ghazal ...

VehShat bharii ShaboN se maraasim ajeeb haiN


kya hi kehnay...MashAllah khoob insaaf kiya... bohat umdah kawish hai .. mazeed ka intazar rahay ga.. abb tak ka shukria.. :rose

wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove :rose

[:Qassim:]

Re: Taza ghazal ...

VehShat bharii ShaboN se maraasim ajeeb haiN


kya hi kehnay...MashAllah khoob insaaf kiya... bohat umdah kawish hai .. mazeed ka intazar rahay ga.. abb tak ka shukria.. :rose

wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove :rose

Salaam

Bhai hamesha kii tarah iss baar bhii aap ka comment paRh.kher be.had khuShii huvii :rose

:insha: umeed kerta hooN aa'inda bhii youN apnii qeemtii aaraa se navaazte rahaiNgay mujhay :phool:

Qassim Mirza :Qassim:

[~*~khawab-e-gul~*~]

Re: Taza ghazal ...

NIce Sharing

[muskaan]

[:Qassim:]

Re: Taza ghazal ...

NIce Sharing

Thank you jee :rose

[:Qassim:]

Re: Taza ghazal ...

Salaam

Aapi, pasandeedgii k liay aap ka mamnuun hooN :salam: :phool:

Qassim Mirza :Qassim:

[ghurob-e-aftab]

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W/salam,

Janab aik bar phir ,, khubsurat ghazal par buhat sii daad qabool karain ,, lihktay rahain :)

buhat khush rahoo :)

[:Qassim:]

Re: Taza ghazal ...

W/salam,

Janab aik bar phir ,, khubsurat ghazal par buhat sii daad qabool karain ,, lihktay rahain :)

buhat khush rahoo :)

Baraderam bohot khuShii hotii hai mujhay aap ka comment dekh.ker ... Mere kalaam ko sarahaa aap ne, iss k liay aapka mamnuun hai Qassim :phool:

Qassim Mirza :Qassim:

[جنیداختر]

Re: Taza ghazal ...

Bohat achi ghazal hai :Qassim: jee apki ... :)

[La'hasil]

Re: Taza ghazal ...

Buhat khooob :)



Buhat hi acha likha hai aap nay :rose



khush rahyeah :)

[Fatima Asad]

Re: Taza ghazal ...

aslaam_u_alikam

bohat khub gazal kahi hey aap ney.
daad qubool kijiye.
shukriya

[muskaan]

Re: Taza ghazal ...

Salaam

Aapi, pasandeedgii k liay aap ka mamnuun hooN :salam: :phool:

Qassim Mirza :Qassim:

wsalaam aur salaam :)

khush raho aur ab share kartai rehna :rose

[- aa -]

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bohat khoob... thanx for sharing.... @};-

[:Qassim:]

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Bohat achi ghazal hai :Qassim: jee apki ... :)

Salaam

Jums jee aapka bohot shukria :rose

Qassim Mirza :Qassim: