My Own

[Aania]

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thnx u so much .. Lexicon :rose

[Salauddien Mengal]

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u are well come

[sagar abbasi]

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tum lakh khaoo main nay door jana hi
iss bay sabab si dunia say zaroor jana hi
tum khara ker kay sir _e_rah<rasta>main nay
apna nahi mauhabath ka qasoor gana hi
tummayain daikhtay hi bahak jata hown
tumari anakhoown ko jamm tumayain saroor gana hi
mugay mat rook iss duina ko choor kay zaroor gana hi

sab nay khay un ko bauth pasand ayi hi tumari poeatry ..per mugay nahi kuin kay main nay dooooor jana hi

[sahil_80]

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yeh poetry mujhe bahut achi lagi.... thanks for sharing.....

[sarfraz_qamar]

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tahts really niceee

[ajnabee]

for Aania - dedicating u

ab say kuch lamhay pehlay may Aania:rose ki poetry per nazar dora raha tha kay mere nazar inkay signature per pari jo kay kuch yoon tha "Mujahy zindagi say shikayat nahee thi" , kher may na tu koi shair hon na shair kehta hoon , per phir bhee socha , ab jab yahan tak aa hi gay hayien , tu kuch dedicate kartay hi chalien , so may nay kuch lines keh dien , keh layin as a tribute..

mujhy zindagi say shikayt nahee thi
sehaar tha tumhara ya chaht nai thi

sang guzray jo lamhey woh duniya ajjaab thi
kiaaa khoya , kia paya ab yeh fursat kisay thi

phir bichray hum jab say , num ankhien mere thien
seeee liya tha labon ko , shikwaay ki adat nahee thi


ek kosish by : (Me)
:embarasse:embarasse:embarasse:embarasse:embarasse :embarasse:embarasse

[Aania]

Re: for Aania - dedicating u

ab say kuch lamhay pehlay may Aania:rose ki poetry per nazar dora raha tha kay mere nazar inkay signature per pari jo kay kuch yoon tha "Mujahy zindagi say shikayat nahee thi" , kher may na tu koi shair hon na shair kehta hoon , per phir bhee socha , ab jab yahan tak aa hi gay hayien , tu kuch dedicate kartay hi chalien , so may nay kuch lines keh dien , keh layin as a tribute..

mujhy zindagi say shikayt nahee thi
sehaar tha tumhara ya chaht nai thi

sang guzray jo lamhey woh duniya ajjaab thi
kiaaa khoya , kia paya ab yeh fursat kisay thi

phir bichray hum jab say , num ankhien mere thien
seeee liya tha labon ko , shikwaay ki adat nahee thi


ek kosish by : (Me)
:embarasse:embarasse:embarasse:embarasse:embarasse :embarasse:embarasse

Hmm bohat acha likha hai aap ne .. n thanks for the tribute .. bohat khush rahen ..

[ajnabee]

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thnx in load Annia , agar tumhien waki hi pasand aa gia , tu mere time ka muavza mil gia :)

[moon moon]

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Aania jee
kia ba ha aap ke kia sharie ha
kia dard ha.
wasa aap ke sharie ma atina dard kue ha .

[raafi]

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bahut khoobsurat likha hai...... meinay takreebas sab parhay hain.......

[sawera]

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wow ania really nice ...app buhat acha likhi hain kiya baat hai
keep it up

[WASI ANJUM]

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nice
bahoot khoob..

[shanafridi]

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TERAHONA NAHI HONA] wah kia baat hai janab,bohoht khoob sab bohot mazay k ashaar hai