pnah???

[WOH LARKI]

Aik nai nazm k sath hazir hoon,umeed hey aap ko pasand aaye gi.:)

[muskaan]

Re: pnah???

bauhat khoob muskan...bauhat hi achi nazam likhi hai aap nai jis mein pachtawoon ka rang aur aik udasi si nazar ati hai...

yunhi acha acha likhti rahiyai :)

khush rahiyai :)

[Yaaram]

Re: pnah???

TO Akhir release kar hi di yeh nazm.....Bohat khoob bohat acha likha hay .............:)

[Brijinder]

Re: pnah???

Can u also write it in roman,Muskan?
Brijinder"Sagar"

[La'hasil]

Re: pnah???

BUhat khoob :)



Buhat acha likha hai Muskan :rose


khush rahyeah :)

[aik_dam_farigh]

Re: pnah???

dear muskaan :rose

zaberdast buhat khub likha hai aap ne :thmbup: :kood: :phool:
sada kush raho dear Ameen :dua

[:Qassim:]

Re: pnah???

Aik nai nazm k sath hazir hoon,umeed hey aap ko pasand aaye gi.:)

Salaam

Muskaan jee itnii haseen aur pur.acar nazam kehnay per merii jaanib se daad qubool keejiay :thmbup: :phool:

Qassim Mirza :Qassim:

[ShAnI]

Re: pnah???

Nazam ka ye andaz hamesha say mera fav raha hai likhnay mein bhe aur perdhnay mein bhi aur apnay bhe isay buhat khoobsorti say istemal kiya hai ... Buhat si daad qabool kejiyay :)

Hamesha muskurati rahiyay

ShAnI :rose

[withlove]

Re: pnah???

aur ujlay daman pe
ruswai ka dhaba !!

kya he kehnay... kitni sadgi se kitnay mukhtasar waqt main kitni taveel guftagooo ho gayee...Bohat umdah qalam hai .. Bohat Shukria..:rose

wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove :rose

[~*~khawab-e-gul~*~]

Re: pnah???

Bohot khoob... Bohot shuqria Share karnai ka

[Zindagi]

Re: pnah???

Bohat khob :rose

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: pnah???

Asslam-o-Alikum WRW B

bhot umda

FeaamnAllah

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: pnah???

Very Nice
But Wher Are U:(
Koi Aur Banda Nahi Hay Yehan Per Too Siraf Main Hee Hun