its my own ghazal,plz mera hausla afzaai karna plzzzzzzzzz

[shanafridi]

suno ab ham milay kaha they
pyar key phool kihlay kaha they,


do qadam chal k becharne wale
etnay bhi ham dor chalay kaha they,


na jeet ka na haar ka pata
kab kaise khelay kaha they,


nazaron se charcha howa hoga warna
silay they hontt kholay kaha they,


zakham pe zakham shauq tha dil ko
kab metay daagh dholay kaha they,


gahbra gaye shan wo shedath-e-muhabat se
apni mulaqaton ka ess qadar silselay kaha they:rose

[Wafa]

Re: its my own ghazal,plz mera hausla afzaai karna plzzzzzzzzz

waah,bohot he zabardast ghazal likhe hai....likhte rahe, shairy mai aur bhi expert ho jae ge....khush rahein...:)

[Shaheen]

Re: its my own ghazal,plz mera hausla afzaai karna plzzzzzzzzz

wah bro nice excellent poetry boht khob

[shanafridi]

Re: its my own ghazal,plz mera hausla afzaai karna plzzzzzzzzz

thnx everybody here,God bless u all my dears

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: its my own ghazal,plz mera hausla afzaai karna plzzzzzzzzz

bahoot khoob aap ka khayal achha hai....

[Mujahid Khan]

Re: its my own ghazal,plz mera hausla afzaai karna plzzzzzzzzz

bohot khub afridi saab inhi khayalaat ka naam shaairy hai

[*Hala*]

Re: its my own ghazal,plz mera hausla afzaai karna plzzzzzzzzz

Welcome shan afridi ji...
buht acha ghazal lekha howa hia ..... keep writing... :thmbup:

[jia]

Re: its my own ghazal,plz mera hausla afzaai karna plzzzzzzzzz

very nice sharing
best of luck

[La'hasil]

Re: its my own ghazal,plz mera hausla afzaai karna plzzzzzzzzz

Ahaaan Buhat Khooob Likha Aap nay :)

[Capt.Abdur Rehman]

Re: its my own ghazal,plz mera hausla afzaai karna plzzzzzzzzz

nice jee...!