*~Lerkian~*

[Aabgeena]

Re: *~Lerkian~*

acha likha hai Aab :thmbup:

likhti rahien :-)

shukriya gul...:rose

[Aabgeena]

Re: *~Lerkian~*

Aabgeena sub se pehlay to aap ko PEGHAM per dil se KHUSHAMDEED kaha jata hey.
Aap ki nazm boht pasand aai, sari larkiyon k jazbat ki tarjumani karti hui iss nazm ka yeh hissa mujhey boht pasand aaya.


janm liya jis pair k saey
jis chaon main khaileen,jawan hoyeen
phir choot gayee us peir ki chaon..
banjaran si sab lerkian...!

Shukriya k sath ilteja bhi k aap aaindah bhi naye kalaam k sath aati rahiye ga.

bohat shukriya muskan aap ki pasandeedgi ka...:rose

inshAllah zaroor share karoon gi...:)

[Aabgeena]

Re: *~Lerkian~*

hummma
nice one

shukriya...:rose

[Aabgeena]

Re: *~Lerkian~*

Asslam O Alaikum,

Bohat hee zabardast i never knew that bohat khoobsurat likha hay bachaya aur bohat sach bhi likha hai shayad ..!! par kuch kuch to jhoot bhi hey :) bohat hee sada sey ilfaz main bohat bari baatein samjhaein hain share kerney ka shukriya jeeti raho khush raho sada abad raho
Waslam

walikum assalam,

bohat shukriya perhnay aur pasand kernay ka...aur jhoot hmm..:)

khush raheay...:rose

[WorThless]

Re: *~Lerkian~*

walikum assalam,

bohat shukriya perhnay aur pasand kernay ka...aur jhoot hmm..:)

khush raheay...:rose

Haan na kuch kuch jhoot tumhein nahi lagta ?

[Aabgeena]

Re: *~Lerkian~*

Haan na kuch kuch jhoot tumhein nahi lagta ?

aap bataeyay aap ko kahan kahan laga hay? phir main batati hoon...

[SAGARKHAN]

Re: *~Lerkian~*

bohut khoob,,,,,,,,,,khush raheyey sadda:rose

[kanch ki mehroo]

Re: *~Lerkian~*

ahaan....bohat khoooob bhaeee...

khush rahiye

[- aa -]

Re: *~Lerkian~*

hmm...

larkiyoan kay dukh ajab hain, sukh ous say bhi ajeeb
hans raahi hai aur kajal bheegta hai saath saath

anywayz...
bohat khoob aabgeena... asaan alfaaz mein aik khoobsoorat nazm ... @};-

thanx for sharing ... @};-

[Aabgeena]

Re: *~Lerkian~*

bohut khoob,,,,,,,,,,khush raheyey sadda:rose

bohat shukriya...:rose

[Aabgeena]

Re: *~Lerkian~*

ahaan....bohat khoooob bhaeee...

khush rahiye

pasand kernay ka shukriya...:rose

[Aabgeena]

Re: *~Lerkian~*

hmm...

larkiyoan kay dukh ajab hain, sukh ous say bhi ajeeb
hans raahi hai aur kajal bheegta hai saath saath

anywayz...
bohat khoob aabgeena... asaan alfaaz mein aik khoobsoorat nazm ... @};-

thanx for sharing ... @};-

perhnay aur pasand kernay ka behad shukriya...:rose

[muskaan]

Re: *~Lerkian~*

janm liya jis pair k saey
jis chaon main khaileen,jawan hoyeen
phir choot gayee us peir ki chaon..
banjaran si sab lerkian...!


ye tum nai likhi hai /hairaan pehlai yakeen dilao mujhe /yhug bauhat hi hassas aur pyari si nazam likhi hai bacha khush raho aur ab share karti rehna :x

[Aabgeena]

Re: *~Lerkian~*

janm liya jis pair k saey
jis chaon main khaileen,jawan hoyeen
phir choot gayee us peir ki chaon..
banjaran si sab lerkian...!


ye tum nai likhi hai /hairaan pehlai yakeen dilao mujhe /yhug bauhat hi hassas aur pyari si nazam likhi hai bacha khush raho aur ab share karti rehna :x

bas ghaltiyan tau bachon say hoti rehti hain na ye bhi ho gayee...:embarasse

pasand kernay ka shukriya...khush rahieay...:rose

[ShAnI]

Re: *~Lerkian~*

Buhat khoobsorat kosish hai janab ki :)
Keep smiling
ShAnI @};-