kahaa us ne........

[sadaf]

ham mazrat khwaa haiN
k
aaj kal apni zaati masroofiyyat ki waje se ham aap sab kaa shukriya adaa karne k liye haazir naheiN ho sakte

lakin yaqeen jaaniye

ham ziyaada dair tak maqrooz nahein rahte:)

aap ki nazr aik nazm.........:rose


ISTIFSAAR:

kahaa us ne keh surKhee kyoN hai itnee teree aaNk~hoN meN
kahaa raatoN ko taRpaatee huyee yaadoN se pooch^o tum
-------------------------

kahaa us ne jamee haiN papRiyaaN see kaisee hoNToN par
kahaa furqat ke tapte Khushk SeHraa,oN se pooch~o tum
-----------------------------


kahaa us ne keh kyoN haiN is qadar uljh~aa,o ZulfoN meN
kahaa keh i'shq kee purpech in raahoN se pooch~o tum
-----------------------

kahaa us ne keh hai shabnam see kaisee teree palkoN par
kahaa hijraaN kee in Ghamnaak barastoN se pooch~o tum
--------------------------
kahaa us ne keh haiN kaisee lakeereN tere gaaloN par
kahaa shab bh~ar baraste mere in ashkoN se pooch~o tum
----------------------------


kahaa us ne yeh kaisee kapkapee t^aaree hai haath~oN par
kahaa Khat likh~te, gh~abraate huwe haath~oN se tum
---------------------------
kahaa us ne keh kyoN hai yeh udaasee teree naz^moN meN
kahaa is zindagee ke be-amaaN lamHoN se pooch~o tum
------------------------
kahaa us ne Sadaf jee! kaisee yeh laGhzish hai qadmoN meN
kahaa pardes meN khoyee huyee raahoN se pooch~o tum

[Yaaram]

Re: kahaa us ne........

last wala sher pasand aaya sadaf umeed hay ke aap yeh silsila continue rakhein gi shukrya :)

[Brijinder]

Re: kahaa us ne........

keep it up,Sadaf.
Brijinder"Sagar"

[WOH LARKI]

Re: kahaa us ne........

Boht khoob Sadaf ji, sari ki sari nazm hi aik khoobsurat sa istafsaar hey. Shukriya for sharing.

[khurram_shaikh]

Re: kahaa us ne........

Assalaam o alekum,



waaaaah bahoooot khoob bahooot hi niraali kavish hai aapki hger baar ki tareh sadaf bare lambe arse ke baad aapki kavish perhnien ko mili hameshaa ki tareh yeh kavish bhi khoobsoorat hai Dili DaaD Qabool karien khush rahien aur aati jaati rahien shukriyaa

[Masood]

Re: kahaa us ne........

ham mazrat khwaa haiN
k
aaj kal apni zaati masroofiyyat ki waje se ham aap sab kaa shukriya adaa karne k liye haazir naheiN ho sakte

lakin yaqeen jaaniye

ham ziyaada dair tak maqrooz nahein rahte:)

aap ki nazr aik nazm.........:rose


ISTIFSAAR:

kahaa us ne keh surKhee kyoN hai itnee teree aaNk~hoN meN
kahaa raatoN ko taRpaatee huyee yaadoN se pooch^o tum
-------------------------

kahaa us ne jamee haiN papRiyaaN see kaisee hoNToN par
kahaa furqat ke tapte Khushk SeHraa,oN se pooch~o tum
-----------------------------


kahaa us ne keh kyoN haiN is qadar uljh~aa,o ZulfoN meN
kahaa keh i'shq kee purpech in raahoN se pooch~o tum
-----------------------

kahaa us ne keh hai shabnam see kaisee teree palkoN par
kahaa hijraaN kee in Ghamnaak barastoN se pooch~o tum
--------------------------
kahaa us ne keh haiN kaisee lakeereN tere gaaloN par
kahaa shab bh~ar baraste mere in ashkoN se pooch~o tum
----------------------------


kahaa us ne yeh kaisee kapkapee t^aaree hai haath~oN par
kahaa Khat likh~te, gh~abraate huwe haath~oN se tum
---------------------------
kahaa us ne keh kyoN hai yeh udaasee teree naz^moN meN
kahaa is zindagee ke be-amaaN lamHoN se pooch~o tum
------------------------
kahaa us ne Sadaf jee! kaisee yeh laGhzish hai qadmoN meN
kahaa pardes meN khoyee huyee raahoN se pooch~o tum

Sadaf ji aap ko masroofiyat ka ehsaas hai magar is khoobsurat mehfil mein apney khoobsurat kalaam sey nawazti raha karein - bohat khoobsurat likhti hain aap - hamesha ki tarha - Aap key mazeed kalaam key muntazir rahein ge :)

[Hassan]

Re: kahaa us ne........

Waooo
bohat achi nazam tahreer ki hay tum ne
prh kay maza aa gaya
liktey rehooo
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[~irfan~]

Re: kahaa us ne........

ham mazrat khwaa haiN
k
aaj kal apni zaati masroofiyyat ki waje se ham aap sab kaa shukriya adaa karne k liye haazir naheiN ho sakte

lakin yaqeen jaaniye

ham ziyaada dair tak maqrooz nahein rahte:)

aap ki nazr aik nazm.........:rose


ISTIFSAAR:

kahaa us ne keh surKhee kyoN hai itnee teree aaNk~hoN meN
kahaa raatoN ko taRpaatee huyee yaadoN se pooch^o tum
-------------------------

kahaa us ne jamee haiN papRiyaaN see kaisee hoNToN par
kahaa furqat ke tapte Khushk SeHraa,oN se pooch~o tum
-----------------------------


kahaa us ne keh kyoN haiN is qadar uljh~aa,o ZulfoN meN
kahaa keh i'shq kee purpech in raahoN se pooch~o tum
-----------------------

kahaa us ne keh hai shabnam see kaisee teree palkoN par
kahaa hijraaN kee in Ghamnaak barastoN se pooch~o tum
--------------------------
kahaa us ne keh haiN kaisee lakeereN tere gaaloN par
kahaa shab bh~ar baraste mere in ashkoN se pooch~o tum
----------------------------


kahaa us ne yeh kaisee kapkapee t^aaree hai haath~oN par
kahaa Khat likh~te, gh~abraate huwe haath~oN se tum
---------------------------
kahaa us ne keh kyoN hai yeh udaasee teree naz^moN meN
kahaa is zindagee ke be-amaaN lamHoN se pooch~o tum
------------------------
kahaa us ne Sadaf jee! kaisee yeh laGhzish hai qadmoN meN
kahaa pardes meN khoyee huyee raahoN se pooch~o tum

very good bohat aacha likhty ho or likho wa kaya batt hai irfanalich007@hotmail.com 0300 5454236

[~irfan~]

Re: kahaa us ne........

ham mazrat khwaa haiN
k:welcome: :welcome: :welcome: :welcome: :welcome: :welcome: :welcome:
ham ziyaada dair tak maqrooz nahein rahte:)

aap ki nazr aik nazm.........:rose


ISTIFSAAR:

kahaa us ne keh surKhee kyoN hai itnee teree aaNk~hoN meN
kahaa raatoN ko taRpaatee huyee yaadoN se pooch^o tum
-------------------------

kahaa us ne jamee haiN papRiyaaN see kaisee hoNToN par
kahaa furqat ke tapte Khushk SeHraa,oN se pooch~o tum
-----------------------------


kahaa us ne keh kyoN haiN is qadar uljh~aa,o ZulfoN meN
kahaa keh i'shq kee purpech in raahoN se pooch~o tum
-----------------------

kahaa us ne keh hai shabnam see kaisee teree palkoN par
kahaa hijraaN kee in Ghamnaak barastoN se pooch~o tum
--------------------------
kahaa us ne keh haiN kaisee lakeereN tere gaaloN par
kahaa shab bh~ar baraste mere in ashkoN se pooch~o tum
----------------------------


kahaa us ne yeh kaisee kapkapee t^aaree hai haath~oN par
kahaa Khat likh~te, gh~abraate huwe haath~oN se tum
---------------------------
kahaa us ne keh kyoN hai yeh udaasee teree naz^moN meN
kahaa is zindagee ke be-amaaN lamHoN se pooch~o tum
------------------------
kahaa us ne Sadaf jee! kaisee yeh laGhzish hai qadmoN meN
kahaa pardes meN khoyee huyee raahoN se pooch~o tum

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[~irfan~]

Re: kahaa us ne........

keep it up,Sadaf.
Brijinder"Sagar"

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[~irfan~]

Re: kahaa us ne........

Sadaf ji aap ko masroofiyat ka ehsaas hai magar is khoobsurat mehfil mein apney khoobsurat kalaam sey nawazti raha karein - bohat khoobsurat likhti hain aap - hamesha ki tarha - Aap key mazeed kalaam key muntazir rahein ge :)

aap nay bilkul theek kaha im agree

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: kahaa us ne........

ham mazrat khwaa haiN
k
aaj kal apni zaati masroofiyyat ki waje se ham aap sab kaa shukriya adaa karne k liye haazir naheiN ho sakte

lakin yaqeen jaaniye

ham ziyaada dair tak maqrooz nahein rahte:)

aap ki nazr aik nazm.........:rose

bohat umdah ....bohat zabardast andaz-e-biyan hai aapka .....specially last k sh'r:thmbup: