Thakan....

[gazal_uzma]

azeez dosto

bohot arsay k bad lag bhag sal k bad apni koie takhleeq aap logo say share kar rahi hon. aara ki muntazir rahon gi.

Main thak rahi hon
Chaltay chaltay
Aabla paie k sath,
Tanhaie k safar main,
Dhondtay dhondtay
Apnay nam pay
Ubharti hoie
Un aankhon ki chamak,
Khojtay khojtay
Meri yad par
Ik aanso ki tapak,
Kuraidtay kuraidtay
Ghamo k bojh main
Meray liye
Khoie hoie
Aik dheemi muskan,
Main thak rahi hon
Tumharay naam ko
Apnay nam k sath
Dekhnay ki aas main,
Main thak rahi hon...
Main thak rahi hon....!

[Wafa]

Re: Thakan....

bohot khoob......:masha bohot ache nazam likhe hai....keep writing dear...best of luck......:rose

[Gul]

Re: Thakan....

Nice Poetry ...keep It Up...!

[Soulmate]

Re: Thakan....

Mashallah buhat achay

[Soulmate]

Re: Thakan....

Mashallah buhat achay

[gazal_uzma]

Re: Thakan....

bohot khoob......:masha bohot ache nazam likhe hai....keep writing dear...best of luck......:rose

Thanks wafa ji
itni khubsurat hosla afzaie ka
thanks alot

[gazal_uzma]

Re: Thakan....

Nice Poetry ...keep It Up...!

thanks Gul
thanks alot
keep reading

[zmufti]

Re: Thakan....

buhat khoob Uzma jee
keep writing more frequently

[Mujahid Khan]

Re: Thakan....

bohot he achchi nazam hai uzma ji,

['SamRazi']

Re: Thakan....

Buhtu zabaradast .............. buhtu pasand aaya tumhara yeh kalam ..... :phool:

keep writing and sharing :)

[*Rida*]

Re: Thakan....

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose
main thak rahi hoon....:em:
buht khooooooooobbb.....buht umdah likha hai...

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: Thakan....

Bahoot Khoob
Umda Nazam Hai

[Soulmate]

Re: Thakan....

nice