Hum Ne Tum Sa Haseen Nahi Dekha

[saba_ki_khoshbo]

This Is First Time That Send My Poem To Pegham
I Hope K App Ko Pasand Aay Gi

[zmufti]

Re: Hum Ne Tum Sa Haseen Nahi Dekha

buhat khoob
Asma jee
aap ki nazm buhat achii lagi daad qabool kijye
likhti rahiye
kuch typing ki ghalatiaN reh gayyiiN heN edit kar lijye

[saba_ki_khoshbo]

Re: Hum Ne Tum Sa Haseen Nahi Dekha

buhat khoob
Asma jee
aap ki nazm buhat achii lagi daad qabool kijye
likhti rahiye
kuch typing ki ghalatiaN reh gayyiiN heN edit kar lijye

bahot shokria
orr ghaltian to hon gi first time jo try ki hey

[ahsaas]

Re: Hum Ne Tum Sa Haseen Nahi Dekha

very nice ...buhat khobsorat:)

[Masood]

Re: Hum Ne Tum Sa Haseen Nahi Dekha

Bohat achha - Saba aaghaz to achha kiya hai ab aagey isse rok mat dijiye ga - daad qabool kijiye...

[saba_ki_khoshbo]

Re: Hum Ne Tum Sa Haseen Nahi Dekha

very nice ...buhat khobsorat:)

Thank u very much

[saba_ki_khoshbo]

Re: Hum Ne Tum Sa Haseen Nahi Dekha

Bohat achha - Saba aaghaz to achha kiya hai ab aagey isse rok mat dijiye ga - daad qabool kijiye...

Daad ka shokria or koshesh ho gi k next time bhi acha likh sakon

[gazal_uzma]

Re: Hum Ne Tum Sa Haseen Nahi Dekha

achi kawish hay asma ji
keep writting and sharing

[Wafa]

Re: Hum Ne Tum Sa Haseen Nahi Dekha

bohot khoob....bohot acha likhte hai...khush rahe...:rose

[saba_ki_khoshbo]

Re: Hum Ne Tum Sa Haseen Nahi Dekha

achi kawish hay asma ji
keep writting and sharing

Thank u very much

[saba_ki_khoshbo]

Re: Hum Ne Tum Sa Haseen Nahi Dekha

bohot khoob....bohot acha likhte hai...khush rahe...:rose

Thank u very much