haadsay awaz detay hein

[WOH LARKI]

Kuch mah pehlay likhi aik ghazal pesh kar rhi hoon,umeed hey k pasand farmayein gay.

[Yaaram]

Re: haadsay awaz detay hein

2nd last sher to kamal ka hay .....aur poori ki poori gahzal zbardast .......thnx for shairng :)

['SamRazi']

Re: haadsay awaz detay hein

Wahh....Muskan jee buhut hi zabardast likhi hai :thmbup:

[Masood]

Re: haadsay awaz detay hein

Na torr paoun purani rafaqaton ki zanjeer ko aur
hamein bhi nibhana, naey rishtey aawaz detey hain

Muskan bohat khoobsrat kalaam hai. Aur hamesha ki tarha achha likha hai aap ney. Thanks :)

[khurram_shaikh]

Re: haadsay awaz detay hein

Assalaam o alekum,


waah bahooot khoob bahoot hi zabardast kalaam share kiyaa aapnien muskan khaas taur per mujhe doosraa aur teesraa behud pasand aayaa dili daad qabool karien khush rahien

[WOH LARKI]

Re: haadsay awaz detay hein

Yaaram, Saima, Masood aur Khurram aap sub ka pasandeedagi k liye boht shukriya.

[Fatima Asad]

Re: haadsay awaz detay hein

aslaam_u_alikam

bohat khub muskan
aap ka share kiya huaa kalaam bohat pasand aayaa.
daad qubool kijiye.
shukriya

[riyaz]

Re: haadsay awaz detay hein

Acchi Gazal hai:rose

bas itna kahna hai,

hadsa roz hota rahta hai
dars-e-ibrat bhi koi leta hai :cc:

[WOH LARKI]

Re: haadsay awaz detay hein

aslaam_u_alikam

bohat khub muskan
aap ka share kiya huaa kalaam bohat pasand aayaa.
daad qubool kijiye.
shukriya

Aap ki pasandeedagi, daad aur housla afzai k liye boht shukriya Fatimah.:rose

[shahid_naman]

Re: haadsay awaz detay hein

belkul theak lekha app na per ka acha laga