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    naheiN

    naheiN......maiN qaanoone maseehaa ki paaband, fitri osooloN se paiham kashaa kash meiN masroof, ik taariqa to naheiN,
    jis k ik gaal par poori taaqa se dunyaa tamaancha lagaaey
    aour wo muskuraa kar jawaaban
    tahammul k aaeine ki kirchiyoN ko uthhaey huey
    mazroob rukhsaar ki surkhyoN ko chhupaaey huey...
    doosri tarf se gaal aage badhaa de

    naheiN....

    maiN to qarn haa qarn se.....

    khwaaboN aour khwaahishoN k wasti pul par, khood aour khoodi ko mitaaey huey...
    Khudaa k naheiN..is zamaane k dastoor kaa bojhh kaandhe pe apne uthhaey huey
    apne taaruf kaa har ik havaala bhullaey huey
    ihtijaaj k har ik muqaffal darwaaze par masloob hoti rahi,

    maiN...k naadeeda rishtoN ki zanjeer ki qaid meiN,
    maiN...k naakarda jurmoN ki taqseer ki qaid meiN
    maiN k aorat k azli, ghar aour panaahoN k khwaaboN ki tabeer ki qaid meiN

    har samjhhote par bin padhe , dastkhat kar k deti rahi
    zulm O ziyaadti, k har naarwaa majboor muuaahide ko
    lab siye, taaeedi mohroN se bayRii banaato rahi..
    maslihat k qafas meiN, maiN khood apne haathoN
    salaakhoN ki ginti badhaati rahi
    maiN eesaarO qurbaani k mantroN meiN hi uljhhi rahi
    aasteenoN k saanpoN ko khoone jigar maiN pilaati rahi
    samaajoN, rivaajoN k in naakhudaaoN k haathoN se matoob hoti rahi

    aour phir jab kabhi, chand gharyoN ki fursat churaa k, kabhi sochne ki jasaarat bhi ki
    naakhudaa cheekh uthhe, tilmilaaey rivaayaat k but sabhii
    aa K mujh pe gareiN...zahr aalood, teeroN ki nokeeli aniyyaN sansanaati huii...

    maiN kalaahoN ki naamoos, shimloN k jaahO hasham,
    maiN qabeele ki naak aour aabruu ki .......majboor, maqhoor, tanhaa aameeN

    besamat si sadaa, begiyaa si zameeN
    har rasm k alaaO meiN zinda hi jalti rahi
    muskuraa kar bhi maghzoob hoti rahi...

    lakin naheiN bus ab naheiN, aik lamha naheiN
    aik pal, aik talak bhi naheiN
    ik jahannum, k har saaNs seene ko ban k kataari lage
    ye ik aagahi kaa beqaabuu saa laavaa
    sabr O bardaasht ki aik taRkhi zameeN jis ko bhhaari lage
    is se pahle...is se pahle k jabr O ikraah kaa aik zaalim saa aatish fashaaN
    mujh ko bhi raakh kar de...

    naheiN..

    sarkashi ki ye mayoob jalti rivaayat mujhhi se sahi
    bus naheiN
    ab bisaateiN ultne ki bebaak, badnaam si ye baghaawat mujhhi se sahi
    sochne ki aziyyat mujhi se sahi, bolne ki ye jurat mujhi se sahi
    karblaa ki zameeiN meri qismat sahi, meri raatoN ki taqdeer wahshat sahi
    meri tanhaai, meri aqoobat sahi...

    ab sare daar bhi dil kahe gaa yehii

    naheiN......ab naheiN







  • #2
    Re: naheiN

    As conveyed earlier,this is my kind of poem-with a conviction and passion.Read Tehmina Durrani's moving n courageous real story in her MY FEUDAL LORD.
    Once again congrats.May i suggest that if u can try to give some more rythm to it,it can become more captivating.
    Brijinder"Sagar"

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    • #3
      Re: naheiN

      Sadiyon purani yeh reet ab badalni chahiye. Woh sinf jo muhabbaton key liye pedah ki gaee thi ussey sadiyon sey zillat key gharon mein dbaya geya hai - NAHIN ab yeh NAHIN hona chahiye aur haan Sadaf aap key kalaam mein woh tadap hai woh lazzat hai jo dil mein ghar kar gaee hai. Bohat shukriyah :)
      tumharey bas mein agar ho to bhool jao mujhey
      tumhein bhulaney mein shayid mujhey zamana lagey

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      • #4
        Re: naheiN

        Asssalaam o alekum,



        waaaaaaaaah bahoooot hi khooob bahooot hi umdeh sadaf waise to pehle se hi hum aapke kalaam ke aur aapke likhnien ke andaaz se muttassir rahein hain bahooot khoob likhaa iss baar bhi aapnien iss tehreer ki tarep ko mehsooos kiyaa humnien bahooot khoob dili daad qabool karien aur aayindaa bhi humaare saath isi tareh share kerti rahien khush rahien shad o baad rahien
        :D:
        :tang: RISK IS MY BUSINESS

        DANGER IS MY GAME

        DONT PLAY WITH ME
        BCOZ KHURRAM IS MY NAME :tang:

        Kisi nien bhi to naa dekha nigaah bher ke Mujhe

        Gaya phir aaj kaa din bhi udaas ker ke mujhe

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