Ab Ke Baras

[NaQsh]

ye mein ne kuch arsa pehley likhi thi in a rough sketch ab us ko edit karke hee pesh karrahee hoon
pata nahin kasee hai ?
Bardasth kijiye :rose



AB KE BARAS
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Ab ke baras sawan nahin barsa,
sukh gaee dhartee,
haY doob gaya savera.

Aas par bethein Najaaney kiski ?
tarap gaeiin hein kalyaan,
murjha gaye hein phool,
toot gaeiin hein patiyaan.

Jasey reza reza bikhrey hein saare khuwaab,
jasey khushk aansouon se behtee hein akhiyaan.

Ab...Uljhee uljhee heraan heraan,
si phirtee hai baade sabah,
kahan kho gaya vo bahaar sa samaan?

Ye ....Sooni sooni veraan veraan,
khamosh si parein hein galliyaan,
jasey cheekh rahey hein merey dil ke khaali kooche
jasey bhujj gaeein hein merey dil ki batiyaan.

..Ab ke baras sawan nahin barsa
sookh gaee dhartee
haY doob gaya savera..........................

[Wafa]

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wow bohot he khoobsurat nazam likhe hai :clap: ...MashAllah ... really very nice.....:rose

[NaQsh]

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shukran wafa

[Z.]

Re: Ab Ke Baras

bohot khoob NaQsh :thmbup:
ye do lines to bohot hi payari hein

jasey cheekh rahey hein merey dil ke khaali kooche
jasey bhujj gaeein hein merey dil ki batiyaan.

khush raho :rose

[NaQsh]

Re: Ab Ke Baras

bohot khoob NaQsh :thmbup:
ye do lines to bohot hi payari hein






khush raho :rose

parhne aur bardasth karne ka shukriya Xenya
by the way i just loved that name
it was unique:)

[Mr. Sialkoty]

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Very Goodie Good ji :blush:

mein aap ka sha-geedar banana chahta hoon, kia aap ko kabool he :blush:

[Z.]

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parhne aur bardasth karne ka shukriya Xenya
by the way i just loved that name
it was unique:)

bardash ki kya baat hai Naqsh---tum likhti hi itna payara ho :D

aur aik do din mey -- i'll get my oldie "naam" inshAlah :$

:rose

[NaQsh]

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bardash ki kya baat hai Naqsh---tum likhti hi itna payara ho :D

aur aik do din mey -- i'll get my oldie "naam" inshAlah :$

:rose

wah bohat hee achey yeaaaaaah that made me smile
good thinking :)

[NaQsh]

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Very Goodie Good ji :blush:

mein aap ka sha-geedar banana chahta hoon, kia aap ko kabool he :blush:

parhne ka shukriya :rose
thanx for the joke

[ummid]

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nice na...
"ab ke baras savan nahi barsa.."
good ji...:)

[snobbish]

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Its quite nice !

mujy first line read karne se esa laga ke mien "lagan" movie ka ek song hai "ab ke baras" kay lyrics read kar raha hoon par ek do lines hain tu touching hain anyways keep on :rose

[جنیداختر]

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Jasey reza reza bikhrey hein saare khuwaab,
jasey khushk aansouon se behtee hein akhiyaan

yeh shair bohat pasand aaya :)

[NaQsh]

Re: Ab Ke Baras

nice na...
"ab ke baras savan nahi barsa.."
good ji...:)

parhne ka shukriya

[NaQsh]

Re: Ab Ke Baras

Its quite nice !

mujy first line read karne se esa laga ke mien "lagan" movie ka ek song hai "ab ke baras" kay lyrics read kar raha hoon par ek do lines hain tu touching hain anyways keep on :rose

ahan......sahee
thanx for reading

[NaQsh]

Re: Ab Ke Baras

Jasey reza reza bikhrey hein saare khuwaab,
jasey khushk aansouon se behtee hein akhiyaan

yeh shair bohat pasand aaya :)

thanks for liking
thanx for reading :)