Jub koi bicherr jaye to....

[WOH LARKI]

:rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose

JUB KOI BICHHERR JAYE........

Dard sisaknay lagtay hein
rooh tarapnay lagti hey
dil k sath sath
aankh bhi barsnay lagti hey
mout bhi aati nhi jub
zindagi bhi dasnay lagti hey
apnay bhi sath nibhaatay nhi
jub taqdeer bigerrnay lagti hey
neend bhi aati nhi aankhon mein
shab e tunhaai bhi barhnay lagti hey
jub koi apna bichherr jaye
zindagi azaab lagnay lagti hey.....

By Muskan

[Masood]

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Jab koi apna bichhar jaey
zindagi azzab lagney lagti hai.......

Bilkul drust kaha hai aap ney Muskan, yeh karb bhi sehna parta hai :)

[WOH LARKI]

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Jab koi apna bichhar jaey
zindagi azzab lagney lagti hai.......

Bilkul drust kaha hai aap ney Muskan, yeh karb bhi sehna parta hai :)

karb ki wajah se face aisa hota hey :( , aisa :) nhiii.:)

[Yaaram]

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wah muskaan bari saadgi se aap itna kuch keh gayi hain ..bohat Aala.....aap mazeed azad likhti rahein .........Shukrya :)

[WOH LARKI]

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wah muskaan bari saadgi se aap itna kuch keh gayi hain ..bohat Aala.....aap mazeed azad likhti rahein .........Shukrya :)

yaaram aap ka bhi boht shukriya:rose , parhnay aur pasand kernay k liye:)

[hayaa_n]

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Muskan ji saada lafzon say saji yeh kaavish khoob rahi. :)

[khurram_shaikh]

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Assalaam o alekum,


waaaah bahooot khoob muskan bahoot hi umdeh aur behud sadgi se likhaa gayaa yeh aapkaa kalaam daad ke qabil hai dili daad qabool karien khush rahien aapka yeh kalaam perhker yeh ghazal yaad aagayi

Jab koee baat biger jaaye jab koee mushkil per jaaye

Tum denaa saath mera o hum nawaaz

Naa koee thaa naa koee hai tumhaare siwaa

Tum denaa saath meraa o humnawaz

[Fatima Asad]

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aslaam_u_alikam

bohat achii lagii aap ki yeh nazm
daad qubool kijiye

[WOH LARKI]

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aslaam_u_alikam

bohat achii lagii aap ki yeh nazm
daad qubool kijiye

Wa allaikum asslaam Fatimah!
aap ki daad to hum ne qabool ki sath mein aap ka shukriya bhi ada kerti hoon, mugar aap hoti kahan hein aaj kal? aap ki traf se koi taza kalaam bhi mosool nhi hua humein:cc:

[Kainat]

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JUB KOI BICHHERR JAYE........

Dard sisaknay lagtay hein
rooh tarapnay lagti hey
dil k sath sath
aankh bhi barsnay lagti hey
mout bhi aati nhi jub
zindagi bhi dasnay lagti hey
apnay bhi sath nibhaatay nhi
jub taqdeer bigerrnay lagti hey
neend bhi aati nhi aankhon mein
shab e tunhaai bhi barhnay lagti hey
jub koi apna bichherr jaye
zindagi azaab lagnay lagti hey.....


Muskan sis that was cool...:thmbup:
and its really true...:)
thanks for postin it....:rose

[SAGARKHAN]

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khoobsoarat:rose

[aik_lerki]

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zabardast

[Salauddien Mengal]

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kya bath hai.............

[Muhammad Khalil]

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nice choice

[WASI ANJUM]

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nice sharing ..................