Mil jaa'aiy Ab Nijaat Ghamo'n Say

[hayaa_n]

Mil jaa'aiy ab nijaat ghamo'n say Khuda karay
Hay kown jo hamaaray liye yeh duaa karay
:rose
Ham tak na us'ka zikr bhi aa'aiy Khuda karay
Duniya agar kisi ko kisi say juda karay
:rose
Aasaa'n nahi'n kisi kay liye tark-e-aarzoo
Dil pay ho ikhtiyaar to yeh faisla karay
:rose
Aankho'n ki raah say is'ko guzar jaanay dijiye
Jab seel-e-ashk dil mai'n kabhi raasta karay
:rose
Zinda hai'n aaj sirf isi aasray pay ham
Shaayad musarrato'n say Khuda aashna karay
:rose
Aankho'n pay haath rakh kay guzar jaaya kijiye

:rose

['SamRazi']

Re: Mil jaa'aiy Ab Nijaat Ghamo'n Say

Buhut zabardast Hayaa jee :thmbup:


Khush rahiyeh buhut :) :rose

[WOH LARKI]

Re: Mil jaa'aiy Ab Nijaat Ghamo'n Say




Aik bar phir aap ki aamed aur payari see ghazal share karnay k liye boht shukriya.

Ap ka andaz e tehreer boht acha hey, Allah aap k qalam mein mazeed khoobsurati peda karay, ameen

[Masood]

Re: Mil jaa'aiy Ab Nijaat Ghamo'n Say

Aasaa'n nahi'n kisi kay liye tark-e-aarzoo
Dil pay ho ikhtiyaar to yeh faisla karay

Welcome back Hayaa :) Aur aap ka wapis aana bohat khushgwaar hai. Bohat khoobsurat ghazal key saath aai hain, main ney aap sey poochhey bghair aap ko ghazal ka urdu image add kar diya hai. Kyun keh aap ki shairi mein aik aisi chashni hai jo mujhey puraney dino sey yaad hai. Bohat achha likhti hain aur woh bhi aik bohat hi kam-sini mein - very nice Hayaa :)

[khurram_shaikh]

Re: Mil jaa'aiy Ab Nijaat Ghamo'n Say

Assalaam o alekum,



waaah waah bahooot hi khooobsoorat ghazal aur utnaa hi khoobsoorat andaaz e bayaan kyaa kehnien haya aapke jab jab aati hain ek behtreen aur zabrdast ghazal ke saath dili daad qabool karien khush rahien iss sher ke saath

[Z.]

Re: Mil jaa'aiy Ab Nijaat Ghamo'n Say



Bohot payari tehreer hai :rose :-)

[hayaa_n]

Re: Mil jaa'aiy Ab Nijaat Ghamo'n Say

ASSALAM.O.ALEIKUM
Barg-e-gul ji,Khurram Shaikh ji,Ta ji,Mushan ji,Saima Shaheen ji:rose aap sab k itnay umda replies k liye dil say shukar guzaar hu'n.ta ji aap nay to is ghazal ko urdu mai'n likh k bouhat khubsurat bana diya hay.bouhat bouhat shukriya.yeh mairi urdu mai'n likhi gaai paihli ghazal hay urdu forums par is liye acha bhi laga.again shukriya qubool kijiye.
aap sab k replies ka bouhat shukriya.
Khush rahiye.
Allah Hafiz

[samander]

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[hayaa_n]

Re: Mil jaa'aiy Ab Nijaat Ghamo'n Say

Sahil ji..itnay khoobsurat reply ko read kar k khushi hui.Khush rahiye.:)

[tallica]

Re: Mil jaa'aiy Ab Nijaat Ghamo'n Say

No tengo parablas!
:)

[hayaa_n]

Re: Mil jaa'aiy Ab Nijaat Ghamo'n Say

No tengo parablas!
:)

Estoy agradesida por su cumplemento.mucha graçias y graçias por todo..eres muy amable.:)

[*Hala*]

Re: Mil jaa'aiy Ab Nijaat Ghamo'n Say

hayaa jii beautiful words .....:thmbup: :salam:

Aankho'n ki raah say is'ko guzar jaanay dijiye
Jab seel-e-ashk dil mai'n kabhi raasta karay :thmbup:

[hayaa_n]

Re: Mil jaa'aiy Ab Nijaat Ghamo'n Say

:jazak: :) Hala ji mujhay bouhat khushi hui kay ghazal aap ko pasand aai.bouhat shukriya..:)

[RulzZ]

Re: Mil jaa'aiy Ab Nijaat Ghamo'n Say

Mil jaa'aiy ab nijaat ghamo'n say Khuda karay
Hay kown jo hamaaray liye yeh duaa karay
:rose
Aasaa'n nahi'n kisi kay liye tark-e-aarzoo
Dil pay ho ikhtiyaar to yeh faisla karay
:rose

bohot he umdah aur lajawab,, pori ghazal kafi umda hai aur bohot pukhtagi hai kalam main. keep it up...