Khizaein - Shairana Contest Nov 2006

[Masood]

Shairana Contest November 2006
Unwan: KHIZAEIN
End of Entry: 25. November 2006

[MuQadas]

Re: Khizaein - Shairana Contest Nov 2006

v niceeee

[Gul]

Re: Khizaein - Shairana Contest Nov 2006

Sure :) mein bhi Khizan per kuch likhnay ka irada karoun gee :)

[Masood]

Re: Khizaein - Shairana Contest Nov 2006

Sure :) mein bhi Khizan per kuch likhnay ka irada karoun gee :)

Zaroor aur yaqinan woh bohat haseen kalaam ho ga :)

[Mujahid Khan]

Re: Khizaein - Shairana Contest Nov 2006

jub bhi ku-e-janan sey mera rehguzar hua
yeh dil mosam-i-khazan key zer-i-asar hua

iss dil sadaa bahar pey muj ko ghuroor thah
yeh jo mosam-i-khazan sey ab dar badar hua

gulshan ki sadaqat pe bhi iss dil ko naaz thah
phhoolon se lagey zakhm tho kaanton ka dar hua

boya thah beech phhool ka dil ke makaan mey
dey dey ke khoon phhool ko kaanta samar hua

yeh dil mosam-i-khazan ka naqsha bana raha
jub phhool ka kaanta merey dil ke nazar hua


rehman mujahid

[Z.]

Re: Khizaein - Shairana Contest Nov 2006

well just a try... and to appreciate others to participate.....

MUjhey yaad hein wo mausam

phool jaisey her qadam per

khushyan thien meyri sathi

apni thi jab her manzil

kabhi dar na tha haar ka



sookhey patton per chaltey huye

dil sey uthi hai bas aik hi sada


lauta dey mujhey wo saarey mausam!

[Masood]

Re: Khizaein - Shairana Contest Nov 2006

well just a try... and to appreciate others to participate.....

MUjhey yaad hein wo mausam

phool jaisey her qadam per

khushyan thien meyri sathi

apni thi jab her manzil

kabhi dar na tha haar ka

sookhey patton per chaltey huye

dil sey uthi hai bas aik hi sada

lauta dey mujhey wo saarey mausam!

Well done sis - yeh ghalban tumhari pehli nazami kavish hai? Soch ko bohat achhey alfaaz mein biyaan kiya hai - very nice... :phool:

[Z.]

Re: Khizaein - Shairana Contest Nov 2006

Well done sis - yeh ghalban tumhari pehli nazami kavish hai? Soch ko bohat achhey alfaaz mein biyaan kiya hai - very nice... :phool:

shukrya :d

ye rahi meyri pehli bachkana kavish :d

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