~* Kahani *~

[WorThless]

Re: ~* Kahani *~

bohat khoob thanx for sharing

Bohat shukriya jeetey rahyeh khush rahyeh sada abad raheyh

[perfectly_created]

Re: ~* Kahani *~

Salam qubuul karaiN pra g ~ :rose

mujhe ik ajab si khushgawaar herat ho rahi hai ye jaan kar k aap shai'iri bhi karte haiN. wa.Allah humaiN iss hunar.e.pausheeda ki khabar na thi. aur phir jab qalam uthha lia to maluum huwa k qalam ki nok kaafi tez hai!

bohat achha laga aap ko paR kar. wo kehte haiN na k:

hum ko kis k Gam ne maara ye kahaani phir sahi
kis ne toRa dil hamaara ye kahaani phir sahi

kya bataayeN pyaar ki baazi wafa ki raah meiN
kaun jeeta kaun haara ye kahaani phir sahi

Bohat adab k sath! :phool:
Usmee

[muskaan]

Re: ~* Kahani *~

:)
Bohat shukriya jeetey rahyeh khush rahyeh sada abad raheyh :rose

phir shukriya :tauba


kya karoon aap ka mein bhai

[Fatima Asad]

Re: ~* Kahani *~

aslaam_u_alikam


bohat khub aap ki yeh nazm bohat achi lagii.
daad qubool kijiye.
shukriya