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[Adi]

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hmmmmmm

Very Nice

Bhat Khoob

[La'hasil]

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Wah buhat khoob


buhat hi acha likha hai :)


khush rahyeah :rose

['SamRazi']

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Assalaam o alekum,



waaah waaah bahoot khooob aapki itni achchi aadatien hain aur humien pataa bhi naa thaa behud pasand aayi aapki aadat humien dili daad qabool karien aur mazeed aisi aadatoon kaa intezaar rahegaa khush rahien

Mere barey mei buhut si batain aur aadatein buhut logo ko nahi pata , Daad ke liyeh Shukriya :rose

['SamRazi']

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aslaam_u_alikam

saima tumhaari yeh gazal bohat achii lagii daad qubool karo.

Buhut Shukriya Fatima :rose

['SamRazi']

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hmmmmmm

Very Nice

Bhat Khoob

Shukriya Buhut Buhut :) :rose

['SamRazi']

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Wah buhat khoob

buhat hi acha likha hai :)


khush rahyeah :rose

Buhut Shukriya :rose

[hayaa_n]

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Saima ji aap ki yeh kaavish bhi mujhay dil say pasand aai hay.bouhat khoob.:)

['SamRazi']

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Saima ji aap ki yeh kaavish bhi mujhay dil say pasand aai hay.bouhat khoob.:)

Buhut buhut shukriya Hayaa_n :ff:

[Dilgeer]

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Another piece of a really high quality - you just need that extra push - good :)

[Hassan]

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auroo sy naihn khud dy dil lgany ki adat hai
shayd isi liey sab ko jhutlany ki adat hay
hahahahhahaha mazaa aa gaya aapka ye shair read krky....bilkul mare pasand kay ayn mutabiq likha hay.... ainda kabhi bhi aapki tahreer ko miss naihn kroo ga.likhtey rehiey magr isi tarh.
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[Muhammad Khalil]

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bohat khoobsurat

[Malang]

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Wah khub likha..:thmbup:

['SamRazi']

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Thnx Malang :p

[hayaa_n]

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Saima ji again read ki yeh poetry...:thmbup:
kiya aamad nahi ho rahi? bouhat din say aap nay koi nazm nahi likhi hay but jaanti hun k aamad k baghair yeh mumkin bhi to nahi...wait hay mujhay...:)

['SamRazi']

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Saima ji again read ki yeh poetry...:thmbup:
kiya aamad nahi ho rahi? bouhat din say aap nay koi nazm nahi likhi hay but jaanti hun k aamad k baghair yeh mumkin bhi to nahi...wait hay mujhay...:)

likhi hain chand ek , magar time nahi mil raha share kerne ak :(