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[vagabond]

na janay kon hoon kiya hoon?
samandar hoon k sehra hoon?
terey manzil hoon ya k rasta hoon?
kabi lagta hai jaisay bas khla hoon
kisi khamosh shaab kay akhiri pehron main tmtmata koi diya hoon
paymana ankh ka hoon aur dil tak barha hoon
main hoon be ya k bus tasever ke ghirah hoon
main apni zaat main ghonjnay walay maazi ke sada hoon
kizi jungle main bhatka hoon ya manzil per khara hoon
mohabat hoon mager khud say na ashna hoon

[gazal_uzma]

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wow
bohot hi zabardast
zat ki talash k safar ko bohot khobi say shuro kia hay aap nay main iss k anjam or result ka intizar zaror karon gi.
wish u all the best
keep it up
regards
uzma khan

[Wafa]

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wow....Mashallah bohot he zabardast likhte hai....keep it up....... :rose