~WaQt~

[NaQsh]

Asalamoalaikum
Ye mein ne bohat bohat pehley likhee thi aur meri pehly koshish.....thi Socha aaj share kardoon aur hosakey to bardasht keejiye ga kyunke bohat sada see hai aur koi ghalati hogaee ho mujhe so please kohtahe maaf:)

Waqt ko ager rok Patey to kia hota
Vo tamam pal ager lout Aatey to kia hota

Vohee saree yadein vohee sarey Lamhey
Ankhon mein ger Sama Jatey to kia hota

Tum se milley bhi to Aye dost juda huwey
Kuch der aur ager tehar jatey to kia hota

Bohat udaas hai aaj dil mera Sehar
Ye dard ager nikal Jatey to kia hota

[gazal_uzma]

Re: ~WaQt~

hum tu sada hi un k liay likhtay hain
agar woh parrh bhi patay tu kia hota

dont mind bus aisay hi filbadieh keh dia hay aap ki ghazal pori ho sakti hay iss say.

bohot acha khayal hay or lafzo ka chunao sadgi k sath sath khobsorat bhi hay

thanks 4 sharing
regards
uzma khan

[*Hala*]

Re: ~WaQt~

buht acha lekhaa hai ..thanks for sharing:rose

[Wafa]

Re: ~WaQt~

bohot he acha likha hai.......lagta he nahi ke aap ke pehle kosish hai....really bohot zabardast........:rose

[NaQsh]

Re: ~WaQt~

hum tu sada hi un k liay likhtay hain
agar woh parrh bhi patay tu kia hota

dont mind bus aisay hi filbadieh keh dia hay aap ki ghazal pori ho sakti hay iss say.

bohot acha khayal hay or lafzo ka chunao sadgi k sath sath khobsorat bhi hay

thanks 4 sharing
regards
uzma khan

janab aapke comments ka shukriya :rose
daad dena ka aur points ka :rose

[NaQsh]

Re: ~WaQt~

buht acha lekhaa hai ..thanks for sharing:rose

thankyou Hala:rose

[NaQsh]

Re: ~WaQt~

bohot he acha likha hai.......lagta he nahi ke aap ke pehle kosish hai....really bohot zabardast........:rose

bohat bohat shukriya wafa ....:blush: sharminda kardiya :)
thankyou:rose

[Masood]

Re: ~WaQt~

Kuchh dard aisey hotey hain chanda jo dil sey nahin jaatey - chahey insaan sari umer un sey peechha chhurrata rahey woh saya ban ker peechha kartey hain. Yeh dard wohi mehsoos kartey hain jo ehsaas rakhtey hain. Tumhara pehla kalaam parha bohat achha laga - I am looking forward to more.... Khush raho.

[Z.]

Re: ~WaQt~

bohot khoob Naqsh

Likhti rahein:thmbup:

Bohat udaas hai aaj dil mera Sehar
Ye dard ager nikal Jatey to kia hota

[Salauddien Mengal]

Re: ~WaQt~

Asalamoalaikum

Ye mein ne bohat bohat pehley likhee thi aur meri pehly koshish.....thi Socha aaj share kardoon aur hosakey to bardasht keejiye ga kyunke bohat sada see hai aur koi ghalati hogaee ho mujhe so please kohtahe maaf:)

Waqt ko ager rok Patey to kia hota
Vo tamam pal ager lout Aatey to kia hota

Vohee saree yadein vohee sarey Lamhey
Ankhon mein ger Sama Jatey to kia hota

Tum se milley bhi to Aye dost juda huwey
Kuch der aur ager tehar jatey to kia hota

Bohat udaas hai aaj dil mera Sehar
Ye dard ager nikal Jatey to kia hota

great...

[NaQsh]

Re: ~WaQt~

Kuchh dard aisey hotey hain chanda jo dil sey nahin jaatey - chahey insaan sari umer un sey peechha chhurrata rahey woh saya ban ker peechha kartey hain. Yeh dard wohi mehsoos kartey hain jo ehsaas rakhtey hain. Tumhara pehla kalaam parha bohat achha laga - I am looking forward to more.... Khush raho.

shukriya parhne ka aur sarahney ka :rose

[NaQsh]

Re: ~WaQt~

great...

thanx:rose

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: ~WaQt~

Kuchh dard aisey hotey hain chanda jo dil sey nahin jaatey - chahey insaan sari umer un sey peechha chhurrata rahey woh saya ban ker peechha kartey hain. Yeh dard wohi mehsoos kartey hain jo ehsaas rakhtey hain. .

:) :)

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: ~WaQt~

Asalamoalaikum

Ye mein ne bohat bohat pehley likhee thi aur meri pehly koshish.....thi Socha aaj share kardoon aur hosakey to bardasht keejiye ga kyunke bohat sada see hai aur koi ghalati hogaee ho mujhe so please kohtahe maaf:)

Waqt ko ager rok Patey to kia hota
Vo tamam pal ager lout Aatey to kia hota

Vohee saree yadein vohee sarey Lamhey
Ankhon mein ger Sama Jatey to kia hota

Tum se milley bhi to Aye dost juda huwey
Kuch der aur ager tehar jatey to kia hota

Bohat udaas hai aaj dil mera Sehar
Ye dard ager nikal Jatey to kia hota

Adaab!!! bohat khoob dear:)

[NaQsh]

Re: ~WaQt~

Thanx Eshaa