Mayri Zindagi

[naina Mustafa]

( MAYRI ZINDAGI )

YUNHI BAWAJHA YUNHI BAYAQEEN
YUN GUZAR RAHI MERI ZINDAGI

KOIE AAS HAY NA UMEED HAY
KOIE PAAS HAY NA KOIE DOOR HAY
JO MARAY AAS THAY JO MARAY PAAS THAY
WO CALAY GAY MUJHAY CHAOR K

YUNHI BAWAJHA YUNHI BAYAQEEN
YUN GUZAR RAHI MERI ZINDAGI

KAROUN KIYA KAROUN KAHUN KIYA KAHUN
KOIE SOACH HAY NA MADAR HAY
KOIE HAATH HAY NA KOIE SAATH HAY
KOIE ENTIZAR NA KOIE ATIBAR

YUNHI BAWAJHA YUNHI BAYAQEEN
YUN GUZAR RAHI MERI ZINDAGI

KOIE AAM HAY NA KOIE KHAS HAY
KOIE KAAM HAY NA KOIE DAAM HAY
BENA DAAM K BENA KAAM K
BYKAR C BAY MOOL C

YUNHI BAWAJHA YUNHI BAYAQEEN
YUN GUZAR RAHI MERI ZINDAGI

KABHI DAYKH KER YUN KISI KO BHI
MUJHAY YUN LAGA JASAY MIL GIYA
NADAN TAHI NA SAMAJH SAKI
KAHIN KIYA KABHI YUN HOWA BHI HAY

YUNHI BAWAJHA YUNHI BAYAQEEN
YUN GUZAR RAHI MERI ZINDAGI

[Masood]

Re: Mayri Zindagi

Naina aap ney mashaAllah bohat achha likhna shuru kiya hai - aap ki is nazam mein khiyaal bohat achha hai but I feel keh wordings mein thori bohat tabdeeli honi chahiye thi... main kuchh help karney ki koshish karta hoon ...

( MAYRI ZINDAGI )

YUNHI BAWAJHA YUNHI BAYAQEEN
YUN GUZAR RAHI MERI ZINDAGI

KOIE AAS HAY NA UMEED HAY
KOIE PAAS HAY NA KOIE DOOR HAY
JO MARAY AAS THAY JO MARAY PAAS THAY
WO CALAY GAY MUJHAY CHAOR K

YUNHI BAWAJHA YUNHI BAYAQEEN
YUN GUZAR RAHI MERI ZINDAGI

Yunhi BE'wajah yunhi BE'yaqin
BAS guzar rahi HAI meri zindagi

Koi aas hai na KOI umeed hai
koi paas hai na koi door hai
jo MERI aas they, jo merey paas they
woh chaley gaey mujhey chorr key

Yunhi BE'wajah yunhi BE'yaqin
YUNHI guzar rahi HAI meri zindagi

KAROUN KIYA KAROUN KAHUN KIYA KAHUN
KOIE SOACH HAY NA MADAR HAY
KOIE HAATH HAY NA KOIE SAATH HAY
KOIE ENTIZAR NA KOIE ATIBAR

YUNHI BAWAJHA YUNHI BAYAQEEN
YUN GUZAR RAHI MERI ZINDAGI

Karoon to kya karoon, kahoon to kya kahoon
koi soch hai na madar hai
koi haath hai na koi saath hai
koi intizar hai na koi aetbar hai
yunhi BE'wajah yunhi BE'yaqin
BAS guzar rahi hai meri zindagi

KOIE AAM HAY NA KOIE KHAS HAY
KOIE KAAM HAY NA KOIE DAAM HAY
BENA DAAM K BENA KAAM K
BYKAR C BAY MOOL C

YUNHI BAWAJHA YUNHI BAYAQEEN
YUN GUZAR RAHI MERI ZINDAGI

koi aam hai na koi khaas hai
koi kaam hai na koi daam hai
bina daam key bina kaam key
bekaar si bemol si
yunhi BE'wajah yun BE'yaqin
BAS guzar rahi hai meri zindagi

KABHI DAYKH KER YUN KISI KO BHI
MUJHAY YUN LAGA JASAY MIL GIYA
NADAN TAHI NA SAMAJH SAKI
KAHIN KIYA KABHI YUN HOWA BHI HAY

YUNHI BAWAJHA YUNHI BAYAQEEN
YUN GUZAR RAHI MERI ZINDAGI

kabhi dekh ker yunhi kisi ko bhi
mujhey yun laga jaisey mil geya
nadaan thi MAIN na samajh saki
kya kabhi kahin yun huwa bhi hai
yunhin BE'wajah yunhi BE'yaqin
BAS guzar rahi hai meri zindagi

[*Rida*]

Re: Mayri Zindagi

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose

very nice

[Z.]

Re: Mayri Zindagi

nice one Naina magar itni na umeedi kyun :)

[gazal_uzma]

Re: Mayri Zindagi

bohot khoob naina.
masood ki suggestions achi hain
keep it up
regards
uzma khan