Aas

[naina Mustafa]

( AAS )

WO PEYAR KERTA TO SAATH DAYTI MAIN BHI
WO WAFA KERTA TO JAFA KERTI MAIN BHI

WO THAM LAYTA TO HATH BERHATI MAIN BHI
WO JOHTH HI SAHI KUCH TO KAHTA DIL SAY MAN LAYTI MAIN BHI

SUB JANTI TAHI PHER BHI JANAY KIUN AAS TAHI
OR AAS TO HOTI HI HAY TOTNAY K LIYA

SO WO TOOT GAYEI AIK DIN

By naina Mustafa.

[gazal_uzma]

Re: Aas

bohot hi khobsorat
3rd misra bohot barri behar main ho gia iss ko thorra short kar lain tu bohot khobsorat nazam ban jaye gi aap ki yeh
regards
uzma khan

[*Rida*]

Re: Aas

Assalam-0-Alaikom:rose

buht khoob...buht acha likha hai Naina

[raheela]

Re: Aas

( AAS )

WO PEYAR KERTA TO SAATH DAYTI MAIN BHI
WO WAFA KERTA TO JAFA KERTI MAIN BHI

WO THAM LAYTA TO HATH BERHATI MAIN BHI
WO JOHTH HI SAHI KUCH TO KAHTA DIL SAY MAN LAYTI MAIN BHI

SUB JANTI TAHI PHER BHI JANAY KIUN AAS TAHI
OR AAS TO HOTI HI HAY TOTNAY K LIYA

SO WO TOOT GAYEI AIK DIN

By naina Mustafa.

buhat acha lakha hai naina nay :rose

[Wafa]

Re: Aas

bohot he ache nazam likhe hai naina.......:rose