Aik Ghazal

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Adaab!!!!
Aik arsay se likhna chhor rakha tha...khasay time baad kuch roz pehlay , lafzon nay hamara kuch saath diya....so kuch tuk bandi ker daali humnay bhi ...:blush: :blush:

[fari]

Re: Aik Ghazal

:clap: Wah kiya baat ha.............bohat khoob:rose :rose :rose Aur akhri shair tu mujhay bohat hi acha laga:wk

[MuQadas]

Re: Aik Ghazal

Wah Bohat Umda

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: Aik Ghazal

:clap: Wah kiya baat ha.............bohat khoob:rose :rose :rose Aur akhri shair tu mujhay bohat hi acha laga:wk

Thanks dear :blush: :phool:

[gazal_uzma]

Re: Aik Ghazal

bohot khooob
her shair hi masha Allah bohot umda hay
regards
uzma

[Wafa]

Re: Aik Ghazal

wow bohot he khobsurat ghazal likhe hai........zabardast...:thmbup: :clap: :rose

[Masood]

Re: Aik Ghazal

Eshaa ji yeh aap ka pehla kalaam hai jo meri nazar sey guzra hai aur yaqin janiyey perh ker bohat hi achha laga hai - har shair key har lafz mein aik ehsaas hai aik biyaan hai jo apni zuban aap bolta hai ... bohat aala :)

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: Aik Ghazal

bohot khooob
her shair hi masha Allah bohot umda hay
regards
uzma

Pazeeraeey k lieey shukriya :phool:

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: Aik Ghazal

wow bohot he khobsurat ghazal likhe hai........zabardast...:thmbup: :clap: :rose

Thanks Dear

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: Aik Ghazal

Eshaa ji yeh aap ka pehla kalaam hai jo meri nazar sey guzra hai aur yaqin janiyey perh ker bohat hi achha laga hai - har shair key har lafz mein aik ehsaas hai aik biyaan hai jo apni zuban aap bolta hai ... bohat aala :)

Ji Masood humnay likha hee bohat kamm hai :) ek 2 nazmein sharee kin theen humnay PG per kafee arsa pehlay.....
pazeeraeey k lieey shukriya, koshish karein gay k likhtay rahein ..lafzon ko saathi banaey rakhein :)

[shummu]

Re: Aik Ghazal

wah wah Eshaa jee ..bahut khoob..pehli baar aap ka koi kalaam paRha hai aur behad pasand aaya..is rawaan dawaan khoobsurat si ghazal pe dheron daad pesh hai.

kuch mere bhi kalaam yahan maujood hain..waqt mile to zaroor dekhiyega..shukriya :)

shumaila

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: Aik Ghazal

wah wah Eshaa jee ..bahut khoob..pehli baar aap ka koi kalaam paRha hai aur behad pasand aaya..is rawaan dawaan khoobsurat si ghazal pe dheron daad pesh hai.

kuch mere bhi kalaam yahan maujood hain..waqt mile to zaroor dekhiyega..shukriya :)

shumaila

A bundle of thanks to you dear :phool: InshaAllah aap ka kalam hum abhi perhtay hain ..hamein yaqeen hai k lafzon ko baratnay ka saleeqa aapko khoob aata hoga .....:rose

[Hamsafar]

Re: Aik Ghazal

wAH ...........................................Kia baaaaaaaaaaaaat hia.........janab main ne aap ki ghazal parhi bohat achi lagi..................aur mujhe bohat khushi iss baaaaaat ki hoi k aap to bohat hi acha likhti ho....................
kamal................aur kamal........................2 kamal.................
10 kilo ladoo aap k naaam