~@~ Mohabbat Amar hoti hai ~@~

['SamRazi']

Mohabbat amar hai,
kabhi mit'ti nahi,
ek baar jo dil mei jagey
To dharkan ban jayeh,
Dil mei, sanso mei, rooh mei
sada aabad rehti hai,
Aisa woh kehtey hain
jo dagh-e-judai sehtey hain
bhooley se jo tum kabhi loat aayeh
shayed humein bhi yaqin aa jayeh ......

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: ~@~ Mohabbat Amar hoti hai ~@~

Bohat khoob sam ji....baaz dafa hota hai aisa k moh: hum per raaj karty hai ..lekin wo nahin de paatee jo hum chahtay ho....siwaey duuri k , Alag raaston k Aisay mei wo mohabbat mann ki saathi ban jaatee hay bas ...aisee saathi jo usey her pal aabad to rakhty hai ..lekin duuri k dukh k saath ....:)

['SamRazi']

Re: ~@~ Mohabbat Amar hoti hai ~@~

Bohat khoob sam ji....baaz dafa hota hai aisa k moh: hum per raaj karty hai ..lekin wo nahin de paatee jo hum chahtay ho....siwaey duuri k , Alag raaston k Aisay mei wo mohabbat mann ki saathi ban jaatee hay bas ...aisee saathi jo usey her pal aabad to rakhty hai ..lekin duuri k dukh k saath ....:)

sach kaha dear, kehtey hain
mohabbat ke rango mei sab se gehra rang judai ka hota hai ""
Aur jo judai sehta hai wahi is ko seeney mei sada aabad rakhta hai.


thanks for appreciating dear :)

[Masood]

Re: ~@~ Mohabbat Amar hoti hai ~@~

Mujh sey kuchh logon ney poochha keh achha shair kaun sa hota hai - to main is fiker mein parr jata raha hoon keh achhey shair ki defination kaisey ho? :cc: kyun keh shair wohi hota hai jo kehney waley key dil sey nikley - ab har shair har kisi ko achha nahin lagta - magar sab sey aham baat hoti hai keh dil ki baat labon tak aaey is andaz mein keh dil satisfied ho....

Tumhari soch mein jo ansar hai woh bohat pyara hai muhabbat key liye - aur tumhein issey biyaan karney ka dhang bhi aata hai :rose - khush rao ...

['SamRazi']

Re: ~@~ Mohabbat Amar hoti hai ~@~

Mujh sey kuchh logon ney poochha keh achha shair kaun sa hota hai - to main is fiker mein parr jata raha hoon keh achhey shair ki defination kaisey ho? :cc: kyun keh shair wohi hota hai jo kehney waley key dil sey nikley - ab har shair har kisi ko achha nahin lagta - magar sab sey aham baat hoti hai keh dil ki baat labon tak aaey is andaz mein keh dil satisfied ho....

Tumhari soch mein jo ansar hai woh bohat pyara hai muhabbat key liye - aur tumhein issey biyaan karney ka dhang bhi aata hai :rose - khush rao ...

is qadar serious comments .......... :-s .. mujhe samajh nahi aa rahi aap ne saraha hai yaan koi shikayat ki hai :p

thanks anyways :)

[Masood]

Re: ~@~ Mohabbat Amar hoti hai ~@~

is qadar serious comments .......... :-s .. mujhe samajh nahi aa rahi aap ne saraha hai yaan koi shikayat ki hai :p

thanks anyways :)

:lol :lol bohat hi buri ho - itna soch kar to tumhein comment diya hai aur tum aagey sey badtameezi kar rahi ho :p - kaan kheenchney parein gey tumharey

[*Rida*]

Re: ~@~ Mohabbat Amar hoti hai ~@~

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose

nice effort....last lines hain is poem ki jaaaan

['SamRazi']

Re: ~@~ Mohabbat Amar hoti hai ~@~

:lol :lol bohat hi buri ho - itna soch kar to tumhein comment diya hai aur tum aagey sey badtameezi kar rahi ho :p - kaan kheenchney parein gey tumharey

aur nahi to kya ........ is qadar serious comments meina aaj tak nahi parhey ,s ar ghoom gaya , phir mei ne check kiya waqaiyee meri hi post hai na :lol

['SamRazi']

Re: ~@~ Mohabbat Amar hoti hai ~@~

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose

nice effort....last lines hain is poem ki jaaaan

right and thnx :rose

[Masood]

Re: ~@~ Mohabbat Amar hoti hai ~@~

aur nahi to kya ........ is qadar serious comments meina aaj tak nahi parhey ,s ar ghoom gaya , phir mei ne check kiya waqaiyee meri hi post hai na :lol

:lol abhi to is sey bhi serious ho saktey they magar main ney socha keh main likh kissey raha hoon - agar baat uskey sar key ooper sey guzar gaii to woh jawab kya dey gi - to reham aa geya :D

['SamRazi']

Re: ~@~ Mohabbat Amar hoti hai ~@~

:lol abhi to is sey bhi serious ho saktey they magar main ney socha keh main likh kissey raha hoon - agar baat uskey sar key ooper sey guzar gaii to woh jawab kya dey gi - to reham aa geya :D

Itne an-parh bhi nahi hain hum

[Masood]

Re: ~@~ Mohabbat Amar hoti hai ~@~

Itne an-parh bhi nahi hain hum

to kitney anparh hain aap, ooooops :bhago:

['SamRazi']

Re: ~@~ Mohabbat Amar hoti hai ~@~

to kitney anparh hain aap, ooooops :bhago:

Aap se thorey kam :zuban:

[Masood]

Re: ~@~ Mohabbat Amar hoti hai ~@~

Aap se thorey kam :zuban:

Yani CHITTEY anparh

['SamRazi']

Re: ~@~ Mohabbat Amar hoti hai ~@~

Yani CHITTEY anparh

is hisab se to aap hum se bhi gayeh guzrey hain :zuban: