Us ne vaa'da vafaa kia aakhir

[Fatima Asad]

aslaam_u_alikam

kaafii time key ba`ad apni aik gazal key saath haazir. umeed kertii hun aap san apni araa sey nawaazein gey.
shukriya

us ne vaa'da vafaa kia aakhir
mujh se milne voh aa gayaa aakhir

kis liye tum udaas baithe ho
kuch bataao k kia huaa aakhir?

maang baithe tumhen khudaa se ham
Haal-e-dil lab pe aa gayaa aakhir

vaqt ki dhoop ne jalaaya jise
vohi pauda nikhar gayaa aakhir

raaz-e-dil jo na keh sakey the ham
vohi aankhon ne keh diya aakhir

jis ko ab tak sambhaal ker rakha
rishta wo bhi bikhar gayaa aakhir

fatima tha jo zindagi meri
maine us ko bhi kho diya aakhir

[Masood]

Re: Us ne vaa'da vafaa kia aakhir

raaz-e-dil jo na keh sakey the ham
vohi aankhon ne keh diya aakhir

jis ko ab tak sambhaal ker rakha
rishta wo bhi bikhar gayaa aakhir

fatima tha jo zindagi meri
maine us ko bhi kho diya aakhir

Aap jab bhi is mehfil mein jalwa-gar hoti hain Fatimah aik khoobsurat aur dilkash andaaz mein hoti hain, baqi kalaam ki tarha aap ki yeh ghazal bhi bohat nafees hai... Yunhi is mehfil ko ronaq bakhshti raha karein :)

[Z.]

Re: Us ne vaa'da vafaa kia aakhir

vaqt ki dhoop ne jalaaya jise
vohi pauda nikhar gayaa aakhir

bohot shukriya Fatimah,

jis ko ab tak sambhaal ker rakha
rishta wo bhi bikhar gayaa aakhir

zaberdast...likhti rahiye aur hamien bhi sunaati rahien

[Yaaram]

Re: Us ne vaa'da vafaa kia aakhir

Bohat khoob aap ki poetry ki kya baat hai very nice :) :)

[Fatima Asad]

Re: Us ne vaa'da vafaa kia aakhir

Aap jab bhi is mehfil mein jalwa-gar hoti hain Fatimah aik khoobsurat aur dilkash andaaz mein hoti hain, baqi kalaam ki tarha aap ki yeh ghazal bhi bohat nafees hai... Yunhi is mehfil ko ronaq bakhshti raha karein :)

aslaam_u_alikam

bohat bohat shukriya masood sahib.
aap ki nazr e karam hey jo aap merey in kaawishon ko itnaa sarhaatey hain.bohat shukriya

[khurram_shaikh]

Re: Us ne vaa'da vafaa kia aakhir

W salaam ,


chhoooti kaafi arse ke baad tumhien yehan dekh ker behud khushi huee aati rahaa karo :) haan her baar ki tareh iss baar bhi tumhaari yeh kooshish behud pasand aayi auroon kaa pataa nahin lekin mujhe waaqaee behud pasand aayi tumhaari yeh kooshish dil ko chhu gayi bahoot khoob ek zabardast kooshish per dili daad qabool karoo khush raho sada




jis ko ab tak sambhaal ker rakha
rishta wo bhi bikhar gayaa aakhir

fatima tha jo zindagi meri
maine us ko bhi kho diya aakhir

[WOH LARKI]

Re: Us ne vaa'da vafaa kia aakhir

fATIMA AAP KI GHAZAL AZHAD PASAND AAI. BOHT SHUKRIYA MUGAR AAP SE HUMEIN AIK SHIKAYET HEY K AAP BOHT KUM KUM AATI HEIN.

[Spy009]

Re: Us ne vaa'da vafaa kia aakhir

vaqt ki dhoop ne jalaaya jise
vohi pauda nikhar gayaa aakhir



raaz-e-dil jo na keh sakey the ham
vohi aankhon ne keh diya aakhir

uper ke do she'r achhe lage...
thankx

[Fatima Asad]

Re: Us ne vaa'da vafaa kia aakhir

bohot shukriya Fatimah,


zaberdast...likhti rahiye aur hamien bhi sunaati rahien

aslaam_u_alikam

bohat shukriya bar e gul:)

[La'hasil]

Re: Us ne vaa'da vafaa kia aakhir

Buhat khoobsurat


buhat hi acha likha hai Fatimah aap nay :rose


khush rahyeah :)

[Fatima Asad]

Re: Us ne vaa'da vafaa kia aakhir

Bohat khoob aap ki poetry ki kya baat hai very nice :) :)

aslaam_u_alikam

shukriya yaram

[WorThless]

Re: Us ne vaa'da vafaa kia aakhir

Main nai us ko bhi kho deya akhir :) bohat khoob .. bohat achi likhi share kerney ka shukriya jeetey rahyeh khush rahyeh

[Fatima Asad]

Re: Us ne vaa'da vafaa kia aakhir

W salaam ,


chhoooti kaafi arse ke baad tumhien yehan dekh ker behud khushi huee aati rahaa karo :) haan her baar ki tareh iss baar bhi tumhaari yeh kooshish behud pasand aayi auroon kaa pataa nahin lekin mujhe waaqaee behud pasand aayi tumhaari yeh kooshish dil ko chhu gayi bahoot khoob ek zabardast kooshish per dili daad qabool karoo khush raho sada




jis ko ab tak sambhaal ker rakha
rishta wo bhi bikhar gayaa aakhir

fatima tha jo zindagi meri
maine us ko bhi kho diya aakhir

aslaam_u_alikam

bohat bohat shukriya big b. koshish karun gii keh aati rahun:)

[Fatima Asad]

Re: Us ne vaa'da vafaa kia aakhir

fATIMA AAP KI GHAZAL AZHAD PASAND AAI. BOHT SHUKRIYA MUGAR AAP SE HUMEIN AIK SHIKAYET HEY K AAP BOHT KUM KUM AATI HEIN.

aslaam_u_alikam

bohat shukriya msukaan jii. yeh shikayat her aik ko hey mujhe sey per kiya karun

[Masood]

Re: Us ne vaa'da vafaa kia aakhir

jis ko ab tak sambhaal ker rakha
rishta wo bhi bikhar gayaa aakhir

Is shair mein aik sachaee bhi hai, talkhi bhi, mithaas bhi aur muhabbat bhi. Yeh usi waqt mehsoos hota hai jab koi aisa insaan bichhrey jo dil mein rehta ho....