Intezar!!!!!

[Hamsafar]

:rose :rose

Aslam O Alekum
Bohat purani hia jab 9th main partha tha

[aik_lerki]

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wow Its really sooperb
bohat he zabardast likha hai ap ny

[Hamsafar]

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Thanks aik larki:rose

boaht porani thi lekin phir bhi main ne iss

ko edit nahin kia :rose

[mahek]

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waahhh bahot khoob

[Hamsafar]

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Shukria Mehak Jeee

[Wafa]

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wow bohot hi zabardast likha hai ..........lagta he nahi ke aap ne likha hai..(just kidding)
really bohot ache hai.....:)

[Hamsafar]

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Bohat bohat sukria Wafa jeeeee

waisay aap ko yaqeeeen aa jana chaye warna aik funy poem aap par

bhi likhi ja sakti hia

INSHALLAH next poem ya ghazal wafa par ho gi :rose

[Wafa]

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umm acha idea hai........:eye:

[Hamsafar]

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Idea nahin hai ye main bohat jald likh dooooon ga

zara time nikal k kion k zara soch samjh kar likhoooooon ga na :ff:

[gazal_uzma]

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bohot hi khobsorat ghazal kahi aap nay
masha Allah kafi rawani hay aap k qalam main
keep sharing
regards
uzma khan

[Hamsafar]

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Sallam
bohat bohat sukria Uzma jee aap ka
MOULA aap ko kush rakhe aap k piyar bhare jumloon se hamara
piysa man serab ho gaya hai sukria :rose