Doston ki be rukhi ne rulaya

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[Yaaram]

Re: Doston ki be rukhi ne rulaya

wow muskaan zabardast ghamon bhari ghazal kis waqt likh li aap ne ......:)

[WOH LARKI]

Re: Doston ki be rukhi ne rulaya

wow muskaan zabardast ghamon bhari ghazal kis waqt likh li aap ne ......:)

ji yeh kal ki hi bat hey, yehan PEGHAM per hi chand batein DOSTI k baray mein parhnay ko mileen to dil mein chubhan see peda honay lagi aur yeh ghazal numa nazm khud bakhud hi likhi gai.

[Masood]

Re: Doston ki be rukhi ne rulaya

Muskan aap ney aik aur bohat zabardast haqeeqat ki alfaaz-kashi ki hai. Aik aik shair apni jaggah la-jawab hai. Jo batein ham doosrey sochtey rah jatey hain woh aap palak-jhapaktey biyaan kar jati hain - Allah karey aap key qalam mein mazeed zor pedah ho. Bohat umdah likhti hain aap :rose

[Mehak]

Re: Doston ki be rukhi ne rulaya

Kabhi duniya ki daastan sun kar roee
kabhi apney dil ki lagi ne rulaaya

Har dard ko chhupa kar sirf muskurana para
aksar mujhey meri khamoshi ney rulaya

muskan bohaaaaat hi achha likha hai aapney. :) :rose :rose

[NaveedIrshad]

Re: Doston ki be rukhi ne rulaya

mer jaye koi tu roti hai duniya
mujhay her pal meri zindagee nay rulaya.
wah..buhat khoobsoorat intekhab hai.
khush rahiye.:)

[khurram_shaikh]

Re: Doston ki be rukhi ne rulaya

Assalaam o alekum,



uffffffffffff itni baari baat aapnien itnien aaraam se keh di bhai maannaa paregaa aapko kyaa kalaam likhaa hai aapnien her sher lajawaab hai dili daad qabool karien aur yun hi likhti rehien khush rahien

[khan]

Re: Doston ki be rukhi ne rulaya

AOA,


MashaAllah bohat acha alfaaz ka chonao kia hai aap nain aap ki tahreer daikh kar dil bohat khush hua hai aap ka bohat shukria.


Sohail Abbasi.

[WOH LARKI]

Re: Doston ki be rukhi ne rulaya

Aap ka bhi boht boht shukriya Khan:rose , aap doston ki housla afzai aur dua chahiye.

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Doston ki be rukhi ne rulaya

buhat afsooooooooooooos huwa dear aap ka afsana parr ker k

[WOH LARKI]

Re: Doston ki be rukhi ne rulaya

buhat afsooooooooooooos huwa dear aap ka afsana parr ker k

:devilsmil YEH AFASANA NHI HAQEEQAT HEY, KABHI KISI KO DOST BNA KAR DEKHANA ,LAG PATA JAYE GA:hathora .

[La'hasil]

Re: Doston ki be rukhi ne rulaya

BUhat khoob :rose


buhat acha likha hai :)


khush rahyeah :)

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Re: Doston ki be rukhi ne rulaya

BUhat khoob :rose

buhat acha likha hai :)


khush rahyeah :)

Boht Shukriya Khawahish:rose
Aap bhi HUMESHA khush rahiye.:)

[amber]

Re: Doston ki be rukhi ne rulaya

Wow very Nice poetry Muskaan!!!

[WOH LARKI]

Re: Doston ki be rukhi ne rulaya

Wow very Nice poetry Muskaan!!!

Thanx alot Amber :rose