Hisab rakhtay hein

[WOH LARKI]

:rose :rose :rose

[Yaaram]

Re: Hisab rakhtay hein

wah jee wah aap to ghazal kehne main kamal rakhti hain mujhey 3sra shaer bohat pasand aaya
aayinda bhi aisa hi likhti rahye SHukrya :)

[WOH LARKI]

Re: Hisab rakhtay hein

wah jee wah aap to ghazal kehne main kamal rakhti hain mujhey 3sra shaer bohat pasand aaya
aayinda bhi aisa hi likhti rahye SHukrya :)

Ap ka bhi shukriya :rose Yaaram k aap ne waqt nikal kar parha, warna mein kia aur shayeri kia, bass thori boht koshish kar leti hoon.PEGHAM par aap ko kuch nah kuch zaroor parhnay ko milta rahay ga.

[Masood]

Re: Hisab rakhtay hein

Waqiye aap har baat ka khoob jawab rakhti hain Muskan, aap ki shairana soch to ab nikhar kar samney aa rahi hai:

Khoob ho tum bhi tumharey swaal bhi khoob
jawab ham bhi, magar lajawab rakhtey hain

Chotein lagti to shayid har kisi ko hain magar har koi sah nahin pata aur is kaifiyyat ko bhi bohat achha qalamband kiya hai:

aik chot bhi dard ki tum sah nahin paey
is dil par zakhm ham be-hisab rakhtey hain

Bohat umdah kavish hai! Bohat achhi lagi :)

['SamRazi']

Re: Hisab rakhtay hein

Buhut zabardast Muskan ji :thmbup:

[WOH LARKI]

Re: Hisab rakhtay hein

Waqiye aap har baat ka khoob jawab rakhti hain Muskan, aap ki shairana soch to ab nikhar kar samney aa rahi hai:

Khoob ho tum bhi tumharey swaal bhi khoob
jawab ham bhi, magar lajawab rakhtey hain

Chotein lagti to shayid har kisi ko hain magar har koi sah nahin pata aur is kaifiyyat ko bhi bohat achha qalamband kiya hai:

aik chot bhi dard ki tum sah nahin paey
is dil par zakhm ham be-hisab rakhtey hain

Bohat umdah kavish hai! Bohat achhi lagi :)

Shukriya Masood, zindagi aur "LOG" :) insan ko boht kuch sikha detay hein, aur mein bhi sabaq seekhnay walon ki saf mein kharri hoon jahan intezar aur umeed to nhi mugar be tabeer say khwab to apnay hein.

[khan]

Re: Hisab rakhtay hein

AOA,


SubhanAllah bohat acha likha hai aap nain mashaAllah dili dad qabool karain.


Sohail Abbasi.

[WOH LARKI]

Re: Hisab rakhtay hein

AOA,


SubhanAllah bohat acha likha hai aap nain mashaAllah dili dad qabool karain.


Sohail Abbasi.

Aap ka boht Shukriya sohail.:rose

[Z.]

Re: Hisab rakhtay hein

waqai Muskan aap key likhney key andaaz mey bohot nikhaar hai

likhti rahiye:-)

[khurram_shaikh]

Re: Hisab rakhtay hein

Assalaam o alekum,


wooooooooooooow bahoooot khoob muskan ji bahooot umdeh aur zabardast hisab hain aapke aapkaa kalam humien behud pasand aayaa dili daad qabool karien khush rahien:rose

[shahid_naman]

Re: Hisab rakhtay hein

yah shairi be app ke bahot zaberdast ha
wha