Hum Bhala....

[gazal_uzma]

Re: Hum Bhala....

very nice gazal,uzma ji bohoth he khoobsoorat gazal likhi hai aap ney,aap ney apney khayal ko iss behtareen andaz mey pesh kia hai keh ,iss mey aap ney koi kami nahi chhodri hai ,keh koi iss per per tanqeed ya iss ki ki tasheeh kar sakey,share karney ka bohoth bohoth shukria

sansible ji

behteri ki gunjaiesh tu hamaisha hi mojod hoti hay

bahar hal aap ko meri kawish pasand aaie or aap ki nazar main yeh jama`ye hay. tu mery liay yeh bohot barri tareef hay... thank u so much

regards
uzma khan

[gazal_uzma]

Re: Hum Bhala....

nice sharing:rose

thank u roshini
keep reading
regards
uzma khan

[gazal_uzma]

Re: Hum Bhala....

Bohat umdah Uzma jee :) ghazal main chand aik aise sher hain jin main raawani ki kami mujhey mehsoos hoi hay ...:) kher main to aik haqeer sa insaan hon .....mere se bhi buland paya ustad sha'ir pegham per mojood haiN :) Hope aisa mujhey hi laga ho
ummid hay behna aap mind nahi karein gi ...is tanqeed ko baray-e-tameer lejye ga :)
Baqi lafzoN ka istemal...bohat sada......qafia/radeef bohat aala hay sab ka sab :)
Apne Qalam main rawani pedah kejye
Shukrya :rose

yaram ji
main aap ki really bohot shukarguzar hon k aap nay apna qeemti time iss post pay dia
ji main janti hon k iss ghazal main bohot si khamiyhan or kamiyan hain. yeh bina islah shuda hi paste kar di thi. waisay juld hi iss ki islah shuda version bhi post karon gi. pls never hasitate to say any comment. cuze tareef say banda srif khush hota hay jub k tanqeed say usay sochnay or seekhnay ka moqa bhi milta hay
once again thanks
regards
uzma khan

[gazal_uzma]

Re: Hum Bhala....

bohth khoob thanks for shairing..

thank u so much