Sooni Sham

[WOH LARKI]

:rose :rose :rose


Aaj ki sooni sham bhi
meri trah se
kitni tunha aur udas hey
shayed issay din k bicherrnay ka
rannj hey, mugar din to
kal phir laut aaye ga
aur meri tunhaiyan door karnay wala
kabhi laut ker nhi aaye ga
tmaam umer yoonhi tunha
aur udas rahoon gi!!!


By Muskan

[Masood]

Re: Sooni Sham

Bohat khoobsurat Muskan ji once again, kya tareef karoon - chhaddo ji tareef nu - lo fer tanqeed karna aan :zuban:

Font ko saheeh karein :hathora lagta hai mera InPage wala thread aap ney nahin parha :tauba - aur doosri baat apni yeh khoooooobsurat si nazam "Main Shaair To Nahin" mein move kijiye :)

['SamRazi']

Re: Sooni Sham

Buhut pyara likha hai Muskan ji

[WOH LARKI]

Re: Sooni Sham

Bohat khoobsurat Muskan ji once again, kya tareef karoon - chhaddo ji tareef nu - lo fer tanqeed karna aan :zuban:

Font ko saheeh karein :hathora lagta hai mera InPage wala thread aap ney nahin parha :tauba - aur doosri baat apni yeh khoooooobsurat si nazam "Main Shaair To Nahin" mein move kijiye :)

jiiiii Sir!!! ghalti ho gai na, wo article parha to tha mugar jaldi k kam aisay hi hotay hein na!:embarasse
Acha mein issay yehan se doosray section mein le ja rahi hoon, post to wahan hi kiya tha mugar yehan :donno: kaisay pohnch gai yeh nazm?:cc:

[rizvizhs]

Re: Sooni Sham

Muskan Ji Maan Gay Aap ko Zabardast (RIZVI)

[haziq]

Re: Sooni Sham

KAYOON UDAAS PHIRTAY HO SARDION KI RAATON MAIN
ISS TARHA TO HOTA HAY ISS TARHA KI BAATON MAIN

[Salauddien Mengal]

Re: Sooni Sham

Great...

[shahid_naman]

Re: Sooni Sham

wha kamal ha app ka hatho ma.....balkay jadu ha..
aik bat puchna chahoon ga...
kaya yah sirf aik shairi ha yah hakeekt