Roshan Umeed(meyri pehli nazm :$)

[Z.]

kuch din pehley train mey safar kertey huye socha kuch likha jaye ...abhi socha key kyoon na aap sey bhi share ki jaye ..aap perhiye aur batayie key kya aap bhi meyri tarhan sochtey hein

"Roshan Umeed"

Roshni ka diya
Roshni ki pehchan
deyti hai hamein
Roshan umeed


suraj ki kiran
barish ki boond
deyti hai hamein
Roshan Umeed

Ankhon ki chamak
labon ki muskurahat
deyti hai hamien
Roshan Umeed


rangon ka ehsaas
Phoolon ki khushbu
deyti hain hamein
Roshan Umeed

[WOH LARKI]

Re: Roshan Umeed(meyri pehli nazm :$)

kuch din pehley train mey safar kertey huye socha kuch likha jaye ...abhi socha key kyoon na aap sey bhi share ki jaye ..aap perhiye aur batayie key kya aap bhi meyri tarhan sochtey hein

"Roshan Umeed"

Roshni ka diya
Roshni ki pehchan
deyti hai hamein
Roshan umeed


suraj ki kiran
barish ki boond
deyti hai hamein
Roshan Umeed

Ankhon ki chamak
labon ki muskurahat
deyti hai hamien
Roshan Umeed


rangon ka ehsaas
Phoolon ki khushbu
deyti hain hamein
Roshan Umeed

Welcome Here and Thanx for sharing:rose :rose :rose :rose :rose
Barg e gul, aap ne boht hi khoobsurat andaz mein apnay mushaheday ko qalamband kiya hey.Really very nice and touchy.
Ab ghayeb nhi ho jaiye ga plz, Doosri nazm kub likh rahi hein? Zara jaldi kijiye ga, hum muntazir rahein gay.

[Z.]

Re: Roshan Umeed(meyri pehli nazm :$)

Welcome Here and Thanx for sharing:rose :rose :rose :rose :rose
Barg e gul, aap ne boht hi khoobsurat andaz mein apnay mushaheday ko qalamband kiya hey.Really very nice and touchy.
Ab ghayeb nhi ho jaiye ga plz, Doosri nazm kub likh rahi hein? Zara jaldi kijiye ga, hum muntazir rahein gay.

:embarasse
shukriya key aap ko pasand ayi ....is ka matlab hai key kabhi kabhi qalam utha leyna chahiye :)

[Masood]

Re: Roshan Umeed(meyri pehli nazm :$)

kuch din pehley train mey safar kertey huye socha kuch likha jaye ...abhi socha key kyoon na aap sey bhi share ki jaye ..aap perhiye aur batayie key kya aap bhi meyri tarhan sochtey hein

Badi khatarnaak sochein hain aap ki Gul :zuban: train mein baith kar socha to nazam likh di :wk , yahan peh socha to share kar di :eye: aagey aagey kya ho ga :tang:

Anyway bohat pyara alfaaz sey ROSHAN UMEED ko aap ney biyaan kiya hai - pasand aai :maan: Jaisa Muskan ney kaha mazeed ka intizaar rahey ga :phool:

[khurram_shaikh]

Re: Roshan Umeed(meyri pehli nazm :$)

Assalaam o alekum,



Lo jee yeh to kamal ho gayi :lol train mien safar kerte waqt aapnien itni behtreen nazm likh daaali hum to barsoon se train mien safar ker rahe lekin aaj tak ek qitta bhi nahin likh paaye :( :( khair aapki peshkash humien pasand aayi dili daad qabool karien aur khush rahien

['SamRazi']

Re: Roshan Umeed(meyri pehli nazm :$)

Buhut pyarey andaz mei likha hai aap ne ...... :phool:


Share kerne k liyeh shukriay :) :rose

[Z.]

Re: Roshan Umeed(meyri pehli nazm :$)

Badi khatarnaak sochein hain aap ki Gul :zuban: train mein baith kar socha to nazam likh di :wk , yahan peh socha to share kar di :eye: aagey aagey kya ho ga :tang:

Anyway bohat pyara alfaaz sey ROSHAN UMEED ko aap ney biyaan kiya hai - pasand aai :maan: Jaisa Muskan ney kaha mazeed ka intizaar rahey ga :phool:

Sochien waqai khatarnaak hoti hein ....in sey dar ker hi to qalam uthaya jata hai :D:

shukriya pasand kerney ka :-)

[Z.]

Re: Roshan Umeed(meyri pehli nazm :$)

Assalaam o alekum,



Lo jee yeh to kamal ho gayi :lol train mien safar kerte waqt aapnien itni behtreen nazm likh daaali hum to barsoon se train mien safar ker rahe lekin aaj tak ek qitta bhi nahin likh paaye :( :( khair aapki peshkash humien pasand aayi dili daad qabool karien aur khush rahien

[Z.]

Re: Roshan Umeed(meyri pehli nazm :$)

Buhut pyarey andaz mei likha hai aap ne ...... :phool:


Share kerne k liyeh shukriay :) :rose

Shukriya Shaheen :-)

[Yaaram]

Re: Roshan Umeed(meyri pehli nazm :$)

bohat khoob nazm hai aapki yeh pehli hai?
main ne bhi ibtada nazm se hi ki thi............Nazm likhne main maharat hasil karein Nazm is best a simple way to say Anything :)

[Spy009]

Re: Roshan Umeed(meyri pehli nazm :$)

kuch din pehley train mey safar kertey huye socha kuch likha jaye ...abhi socha key kyoon na aap sey bhi share ki jaye ..aap perhiye aur batayie key kya aap bhi meyri tarhan sochtey hein

"Roshan Umeed"

Roshni ka diya
Roshni ki pehchan
deyti hai hamein
Roshan umeed


suraj ki kiran
barish ki boond
deyti hai hamein
Roshan Umeed

Ankhon ki chamak
labon ki muskurahat
deyti hai hamien
Roshan Umeed


rangon ka ehsaas
Phoolon ki khushbu
deyti hain hamein
Roshan Umeed

Iss se yeh pata chalta hai...ke safar ke dauran aap kaafi kuchh sochti hain...Sir Elamma Iqbal ki aap zabardast fan hain...by the way achha nazm hai...soch bhi Roshan ummed hai...lekin kari aage to barhayein...
keep it up...

[Fatima Asad]

Re: Roshan Umeed(meyri pehli nazm :$)

aslaam_u_alikam

bohat khubsoorat koshish hey bar e gul aap kii.
daad qubool kijiye.

[Z.]

Re: Roshan Umeed(meyri pehli nazm :$)

bohat khoob nazm hai aapki yeh pehli hai?
main ne bhi ibtada nazm se hi ki thi............Nazm likhne main maharat hasil karein Nazm is best a simple way to say Anything :)

shukriya yaaram,
jee ye pehli hi hai ...is ko deyk ker nahi lagta? :-)

[La'hasil]

Re: Roshan Umeed(meyri pehli nazm :$)

Zaberdast pehli bar likha aur buhat khobsurat likha :rose


likhti raha karein Gul acha likhti hian aap :)


khush rahyeah :)

[Z.]

Re: Roshan Umeed(meyri pehli nazm :$)

...by the way achha nazm hai...soch bhi Roshan ummed hai...lekin kari aage to barhayein...
keep it up...

shukriya spy,

aslaam_u_alikam

bohat khubsoorat koshish hey bar e gul aap kii.
daad qubool kijiye.

ws wr,
bohot shukriya Fatimah :-)