meray khwab ka bojh

[WOH LARKI]

[Masood]

Re: meray khwab ka bojh

....
aik aur raat apney daman mein
merey bikhrey khawab ka bojh
uthaey guzr gaee!!!!

Khawabon ki duniya mein rehney wali larkiyon key jazbaat ki bohat zabardast tarjumani ki hai aap ney apni is nazm mein Muskan. Merey alfaz kam par jatey hain keh aap ki soch ko kaisey sehraoun, bohat nafees aur shustgee sey likhti hain aap, likha kijiye bohat achha lagta hai par kar :)

[WOH LARKI]

Re: meray khwab ka bojh

....
aik aur raat apney daman mein
merey bikhrey khawab ka bojh
uthaey guzr gaee!!!!

Khawabon ki duniya mein rehney wali larkiyon key jazbaat ki bohat zabardast tarjumani ki hai aap ney apni is nazm mein Muskan. Merey alfaz kam par jatey hain keh aap ki soch ko kaisey sehraoun, bohat nafees aur shustgee sey likhti hain aap, likha kijiye bohat achha lagta hai par kar :)

shukriya masood k aap ko nazm pasand aai. jahan tak khabon aur larkiyon ka taluq hey to in ki taqdeer aik jaisi hoti hey, larkiyan dukh ki tareeki mein rehti hein aur khabon ka husan bhi tareeki mein hi nikherta hey. han qismat achi ho to in k muqadar ki sehar tabeer bhi ban jaya kerti hey mugar shaz o nadar hi.............

[hayaa_n]

Re: meray khwab ka bojh

Muskan ji aap ki khubsurat jazbbon say gundhi yeh nazm bhi mujhay bouhat pasand aai hay :masha bouhat umda likhti hain aap.:)

[WOH LARKI]

Re: meray khwab ka bojh

:) Shukriya Hayya ji, aap ki housla afzai sath rahi to meray kawishon mein mazeed nikhar peda ho ga.

[khurram_shaikh]

Re: meray khwab ka bojh

Assalaam o alekum,

Waaah bahooot khoob bahoot hi umdeh kalaam likhaa aapnien hameshaa ki tareh yeh kalam bhi qabl e tareef hai dili daad qabol karien likhti rahien khush rahien

[WOH LARKI]

Re: meray khwab ka bojh

Assalaam o alekum,

Waaah bahooot khoob bahoot hi umdeh kalaam likhaa aapnien hameshaa ki tareh yeh kalam bhi qabl e tareef hai dili daad qabol karien likhti rahien khush rahien

Khurram bhai aap ka boht shukriya jo aap humesha meri koshishon ko sarahtay hein aap bhi khush rahiye, ameen

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: meray khwab ka bojh

Asslam-o-ALikum WR WB

Mashalah Muskan ji ............ aap Mashalah ..bhot umda khatay ho aap ki shiri ki khubi ya hay kay aap ki sh iri sach bolti hay ...

FEmanAllah

[Salauddien Mengal]

Re: meray khwab ka bojh

great...............

[shahid_naman]

Re: meray khwab ka bojh

rose:rosegood rose:rose