Jab se hua......khawab

[aroosa]

Jab se hua hai woh khwab ki tarah
Kaash ke ajaye wo tabeer ki terah

Ho Nahi sakta Dil mere Nadaan
yeh tu chah hey ik saraab ki terah

Kaisey dehkoon usey in ankhou se
Wo tu jaise ban gia hey Ajnabi ki terah

Dil todh diya uss zaalim ne aaj mera
nighain phair lee hain osne bewafa ki terah

Chahe`nge ussey pihr bih her pal aisey
Goya seena me rehta hey, mere dil ki terah

tabeer thi naa kabih itni behanaak
chehra murjha gia hey kissi pohool ki terha :rose

[khurram_shaikh]

Re: Jab se hua......khawab

Assalaam o alekum,



waaah waaah bahooot khoob komal bahoot hi zabardast kavish share ki aapnien waise to saari kavish hi humien pasand aayi lekin yeh misra behud pasand aayaa dili daad qabool karien khush rahien

[handsome]

Re: Jab se hua......khawab

bohat accha likha hay app nay :rose

[aroosa]

Re: Jab se hua......khawab

thankssss yeh komal kon hai btw ? :D

[WOH LARKI]

Re: Jab se hua......khawab

Chahe`nge ussey pihr bih her pal aisey
Goya seena me rehta hey, mere dil ki terah



boht hi umdah Aroosa, mugar plz Inpage mein likhnay ki koshish kijiye, iss trah aap ka kalam zayada members ki nazron se guzray ga, Thanx for sharing:rose .

[Saajan]

Re: Jab se hua......khawab

BUhat khooooob ....

khush raho g .

[Yaaram]

Re: Jab se hua......khawab

bohat khoooooooooob........ acha kalam hai apaka aur kamal ka zoaq paya hai aapne :)
Keep sharing :)

[Hassan]

Re: Jab se hua......khawab

bohat umdaa.
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klaam or kaya.
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