Ghazal: Khoon-i-Dil pi ker

[Aik Lamha]

Assalam-0-Alaikum Saathio!

Aik Adad ghazal paish-i-khidmat hay.... ummeed hay parh ker raye zaroor deingay...

[Masood]

Re: Ghazal: Khoon-i-Dil pi ker

Hijjar ki yeh daastan bhi waqt mein kho jaey gi
waqt bhi yeh ik bhooli daastan ho jaey ga

Moin bohat umdah andaz mein aap ney izhar-e-biyaan kiya hia - har shair aik misaal hai aap ki khoobi-e-biyaan ki :) Khush rahiye

[Aik Lamha]

Re: Ghazal: Khoon-i-Dil pi ker

Hijjar ki yeh daastan bhi waqt mein kho jaey gi
waqt bhi yeh ik bhooli daastan ho jaey ga

Moin bohat umdah andaz mein aap ney izhar-e-biyaan kiya hia - har shair aik misaal hai aap ki khoobi-e-biyaan ki :) Khush rahiye

Thanx Masood.. :)

Hosla afzayee k liye aap ka mamnoon hoon..
khush rahiye aap.

[Aania]

Re: Ghazal: Khoon-i-Dil pi ker

Assalam-0-Alaikum Saathio!

Aik Adad ghazal paish-i-khidmat hay.... ummeed hay parh ker raye zaroor deingay...

wow.. all in all zabardast... Moinoo... :thmbup::thmbup::thmbup:

sha'r number teen ... ka "behr e alam " zara explaino.... :mm:

[Aik Lamha]

Re: Ghazal: Khoon-i-Dil pi ker

wow.. all in all zabardast... Moinoo... :thmbup::thmbup::thmbup:

sha'r number teen ... ka "behr e alam " zara explaino.... :mm:

Thanx aania.....


behr-i-alam ka matlab.. gham ka samandar....

[Aatif Saeed]

Re: Ghazal: Khoon-i-Dil pi ker

Bohat Khobsoorat Ghazal share kee hai Moin Tum ne


Jeetay raho


Aatif

[Aik Lamha]

Re: Ghazal: Khoon-i-Dil pi ker

Bohat Khobsoorat Ghazal share kee hai Moin Tum ne


Jeetay raho


Aatif

Aray Aatif bhai... aap.... bari khushgawar hairat huwi aap ko dekh ker... :)


buhat buhat shukrya hosla afzayee kay liye....

[Aania]

Re: Ghazal: Khoon-i-Dil pi ker

Thanx aania.....


behr-i-alam ka matlab.. gham ka samandar....

thnx u bachey... khush raho.. :lpop:

[tauseeftariq]

Re: Ghazal: Khoon-i-Dil pi ker

ajnabi asam ho jay ga.... wah wah
yeh shere sup sey cooooooolllllllll hai

[Aik Lamha]

Re: Ghazal: Khoon-i-Dil pi ker

thnx u bachey... khush raho.. :lpop:

u r welcome bachi.... u bhi khush raho :zuban:

[Aik Lamha]

Re: Ghazal: Khoon-i-Dil pi ker

ajnabi asam ho jay ga.... wah wah
yeh shere sup sey cooooooolllllllll hai

Thanx tauseef... khush rhaiye

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Ghazal: Khoon-i-Dil pi ker

Ary wow beautifull great poetry

[Aik Lamha]

Re: Ghazal: Khoon-i-Dil pi ker

Ary wow beautifull great poetry

Thanx Khalil Payen.... :phool:

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Ghazal: Khoon-i-Dil pi ker

Thanx Khalil Payen.... :phool:

U alway welcome Brother:salam: