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    jahalat

    :think: har taraf bhikhri pari jahalat hai :think: is se kharab hue meri haalat hai :think: jitne marzi hool charhae apni zaat par :think:khabhi na kabhi dikha dete ye apni zalalat hai :think:
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    Re: jahalat

    achi koshish hay, magar shayeri main ahtiraam ka hona bohat zaroori hota hay warna shayeri main wazan kam, ziayadtee ziyada lagti hay!!!

    yeh shair aur acha likha jaa sakta tha, concept bohat acha hay, thoRi mehnat ki zaroorat hay, keep writing, good luck, khush rahyeh :)
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