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  • Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~


    یہ دل ہی جانتا ہے کہ کس حوصلے کے ساتھ
    نا قدریء متاع ہنر دیکھتے رہے

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    • Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

      yeh batain kitabi yeh nazmain purani
      na inki haqiqat na inki kahani
      na likhna inhe na mehfooz kerna
      yeh jazby hain bus inko mehsoos kerna

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      • Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

        Aaye Tou Yoon K Jesay Hmeshaa Thay Mehrubaan
        Bhoolay Tou Yoon K Goyya Kbhi Aashna Na Thay
        شاہ حسین جیہناں سچ پچھاتا' کامل عِشق تیہناں دا جاتا

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        • Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

          yahan her kisi say hi Bair hai tera sher Qariya-e-ghair hai
          yahan sehal bhi tu nahi koi mery bay khaber tujhay dhondna
          teri yaad i tu ro diya, jo tu mil giya tu tujhy kho diya
          mery silsilay bhi ajeeb hain tujhay chor ker tujhy dhondna

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          • Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

            Uss Tan Ki Trf Dekho Jo Qatal Gaah E Dil Me Hai
            Kya Rakhaa Hai Maqtal Me Ae Chashm E Tamashai
            شاہ حسین جیہناں سچ پچھاتا' کامل عِشق تیہناں دا جاتا

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            • Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

              Saraah!!! mera shair tu ALIF pay khtam ho raha tha yar....

              Yun hi nahi mashor-e-zamana qatil mera
              us qatil ko is fan main mahart bhi bohat hai

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              • Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

                Originally posted by SADAFASLAM View Post
                Saraah!!! mera shair tu ALIF pay khtam ho raha tha yar....

                ab aayegaa majaa laRaaii dekhne kaa...laRo bhai, laRo...me ready to watch! hehehe 372-haha

                yeh bhii to karam hai k zaKhmoN ko jilaate haiN
                hai unkii jafaa meN bhii andaaz-e-maseeHaaii

                a she'r by ME :)

                Fall view from inside my car
                near my work place :)

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                • Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

                  Originally posted by SADAFASLAM View Post
                  Saraah!!! mera shair tu ALIF pay khtam ho raha tha yar....

                  Yun hi nahi mashor-e-zamana qatil mera
                  us qatil ko is fan main mahart bhi bohat hai
                  HAAAYENNN...yar "uss" b tou alif se shuru hota hai na:donno:
                  شاہ حسین جیہناں سچ پچھاتا' کامل عِشق تیہناں دا جاتا

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                  • Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

                    oh haan sahi ...

                    koi baat nahi

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                    • Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

                      Originally posted by SADAFASLAM View Post
                      oh haan sahi ...

                      koi baat nahi

                      bait baazii kaa yeh kaun sa nayaa rule nikaalaa hai aap logoN ne ? :( traditional bait baazii emn to lafz-e-aaKhir ke Harf-e-aaKhir se ash'aar diye jaate haiiN?

                      yeh do logoN ke ash'aar meN kia se kia ho gayaa?
                      k dekhte hii dekhte qawaaneen badal gaye!!! hehehe

                      Fall view from inside my car
                      near my work place :)

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                      • Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

                        hai unkii jafaa meN bhii andaaz-e-maseeHaaii

                        Yai.

                        yuN hii hamdam gharii bhar ko milaa karte to behtar thaa
                        ke dono waqt jaise roz milte hain judaa hokar...

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                        • Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

                          Originally posted by SADAFASLAM View Post
                          yuN hii hamdam gharii bhar ko milaa karte to behtar thaa
                          ke dono waqt jaise roz milte hain judaa hokar...

                          kar...RE se:

                          ranj hai, aah o fuGhaaN hai, dard hai, faryaad hai
                          aajkal gulshan kaa gulshan Khaana-e-saiyaad hai

                          another she'r by ME :)

                          Fall view from inside my car
                          near my work place :)

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                          • Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

                            Yai

                            Yaar-o-aghyar key hathon mein kamanein thi Faraz!
                            aur sab dekh rahey they nishana tu tha...

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                            • Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

                              Aansoo mere tam jaye to phir shoq se jaana
                              aise me kaha jaaoge barsaat bouhat hai

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                              • Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

                                y3 haqiiqat hai k3 hotaa hai asar baaton m3i
                                tum bhii khul jaaog3 do-chaar mulaaqaaton m3i

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