~~Bait Baazi~~

[Gul]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

یہ دل ہی جانتا ہے کہ کس حوصلے کے ساتھ
نا قدریء متاع ہنر دیکھتے رہے

[SADAFASLAM]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

yeh batain kitabi yeh nazmain purani
na inki haqiqat na inki kahani
na likhna inhe na mehfooz kerna
yeh jazby hain bus inko mehsoos kerna

[saraah]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Aaye Tou Yoon K Jesay Hmeshaa Thay Mehrubaan
Bhoolay Tou Yoon K Goyya Kbhi Aashna Na Thay

[SADAFASLAM]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

yahan her kisi say hi Bair hai tera sher Qariya-e-ghair hai
yahan sehal bhi tu nahi koi mery bay khaber tujhay dhondna
teri yaad i tu ro diya, jo tu mil giya tu tujhy kho diya
mery silsilay bhi ajeeb hain tujhay chor ker tujhy dhondna

[saraah]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Uss Tan Ki Trf Dekho Jo Qatal Gaah E Dil Me Hai
Kya Rakhaa Hai Maqtal Me Ae Chashm E Tamashai

[SADAFASLAM]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Saraah!!! mera shair tu ALIF pay khtam ho raha tha yar....

Yun hi nahi mashor-e-zamana qatil mera
us qatil ko is fan main mahart bhi bohat hai

[SherAli]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Saraah!!! mera shair tu ALIF pay khtam ho raha tha yar....

ab aayegaa majaa laRaaii dekhne kaa...laRo bhai, laRo...me ready to watch! hehehe 372-haha

yeh bhii to karam hai k zaKhmoN ko jilaate haiN
hai unkii jafaa meN bhii andaaz-e-maseeHaaii

a she'r by ME :)

[saraah]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Saraah!!! mera shair tu ALIF pay khtam ho raha tha yar....

Yun hi nahi mashor-e-zamana qatil mera
us qatil ko is fan main mahart bhi bohat hai

HAAAYENNN...yar "uss" b tou alif se shuru hota hai na:donno:

[SADAFASLAM]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

oh haan sahi ...

koi baat nahi

[SherAli]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

oh haan sahi ...

koi baat nahi

bait baazii kaa yeh kaun sa nayaa rule nikaalaa hai aap logoN ne ? :( traditional bait baazii emn to lafz-e-aaKhir ke Harf-e-aaKhir se ash'aar diye jaate haiiN?

yeh do logoN ke ash'aar meN kia se kia ho gayaa?
k dekhte hii dekhte qawaaneen badal gaye!!! hehehe

[SADAFASLAM]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

hai unkii jafaa meN bhii andaaz-e-maseeHaaii

Yai.

yuN hii hamdam gharii bhar ko milaa karte to behtar thaa
ke dono waqt jaise roz milte hain judaa hokar...

[SherAli]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

yuN hii hamdam gharii bhar ko milaa karte to behtar thaa
ke dono waqt jaise roz milte hain judaa hokar...

kar...RE se:

ranj hai, aah o fuGhaaN hai, dard hai, faryaad hai
aajkal gulshan kaa gulshan Khaana-e-saiyaad hai

another she'r by ME :)

[SADAFASLAM]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Yai

Yaar-o-aghyar key hathon mein kamanein thi Faraz!
aur sab dekh rahey they nishana tu tha...

[sohail khan]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Aansoo mere tam jaye to phir shoq se jaana
aise me kaha jaaoge barsaat bouhat hai

[*khushi*]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

y3 haqiiqat hai k3 hotaa hai asar baaton m3i
tum bhii khul jaaog3 do-chaar mulaaqaaton m3i