Misra boojein aur shair mukamil karian

[mahek]

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Mere khsayal se PG per aisa koi thread nahi hai .jis mein misra boojh ker sher mukammil karein.

Tu karna kuchh yoon hai ke kisi mashoor shayer ke mashoor sher ka pehla misra likhna hai aur dosra misra agla sathi booje ga aur jis sathi ne wo dosra misra booj lia aur sher mukmil ker dia tu phir yai uski hi turn hogi ke kisi aur mashoor shayer ka koi mashhoor sa misra likh de aur ya silsala jari rakhein.

tu ye thred is misry se shoro kerte hain


"beth ker saaya-e-gul main Nasir"

[Masood]

Re: Misra boojein aur shair mukamil karian

Kise ho sub?

Mere khsayal se PG per aisa koi thread nahi hai .jis mein misra boojh ker sher mukammil karein.

Tu karna kuchh yoon hai ke kisi mashoor shayer ke mashoor sher ka pehla misra likhna hai aur dosra misra agla sathi booje ga aur jis sathi ne wo dosra misra booj lia aur sher mukmil ker dia tu phir yai uski hi turn hogi ke kisi aur mashoor shayer ka koi mashhoor sa misra likh de aur ya silsala jari rakhein.

tu ye thred is misry se shoro kerte hain

"beth ker saaya-e-gul main Nasir"

Wa salaam Jeeti raho

Achha silsila hai - to main ney kya karna hai yahan? :p

Ohh achha shair bhoojna hai, to boojh letey hain..

ham bohat roey jab danda parra :P

sorry sahi likha hoon ab:

ham bohat roey woh jab yaad aaya


agla shair:

Na jana keh duniya sey jata hai koi

[Gul]

Re: Misra boojein aur shair mukamil karian

hmm!! saoch k soach k .........hmmm

nahi aa raha zehan mein :(

[mahek]

Re: Misra boojein aur shair mukamil karian

agla shair:

Na jana keh duniya sey jata hai koi[/CENTER]

sher kisi mash hoor shayer ka hona chahiye taaki topic aage chal sake..:hii:

[kutkutariyaan]

Re: Misra boojein aur shair mukamil karian

Great sharing :)

Good

Keep it chiips

[BANJARAH]

Re: Misra boojein aur shair mukamil karian

Wa salaam Jeeti raho

Achha silsila hai - to main ney kya karna hai yahan? :p

Ohh achha shair bhoojna hai, to boojh letey hain..

ham bohat roey jab danda parra :P

sorry sahi likha hoon ab:

ham bohat roey woh jab yaad aaya

agla shair:

Na jana keh duniya sey jata hai koi

Masood Sahib!
Yeh Sher Aap Khud Mukammal Kar Dain.
Aur Agla Misra Dain, Kionke Mera Khayal
Yeh Sher Ziyada Mash'hoor Nahi Hay! :rose