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[Gul]

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[Eshaa Chaudhry]

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:)

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

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:d:

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

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hmm shayad is sh'r may humny koi garbar kar dee hay...........agar kisi ko sahee sh'r maloom to correct kar dijiey ga

[Gul]

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hmm shayad is sh'r may humny koi garbar kar dee hay...........agar kisi ko sahee sh'r maloom to correct kar dijiey ga

Bass thori see MishTake hai :)

Yeh dastoor-e zubaaN bandi hai kesa teri mehfil mein
Yehan tu baat karnay ko tarasti hai zubaan meri :)

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[Masood]

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Gul key is khoobsurat shair ko aagey ley ker chalta hoon... (yeh ghazal mujhey bohat pasand hai, aur Gulbahar Bano ney issey bohat hi achhey andaz mein gaya bhi hai).

[Gul]

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Chalein mein iss ko mukamal kiyay deyti hooN :) ............!

[aik_lerki]

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Kabhi bay basi mai bhe hans diay to kabhe hansi ny hum ko rula diya
Kabhi ek ko apna na kar sakay kabhi khud ko sab ka bana diya
Hai ajab meri zindagi kay main haarti rahi jeet kar
Jo khawab obhry thy aankh main onhain aankh main he sula diya

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

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Bass thori see MishTake hai :)

Yeh dastoor-e zubaaN bandi hai kesa teri mehfil mein
Yehan tu baat karnay ko tarasti hai zubaan meri :)

Thanks for correction :phool:
actually Almost 1 n half year baad hum phir se bait baazi karnay lagay wo bhi yahan aik gathering mein bait baazi huey to dil chaha k bait baazi karein................... usee se bas kuch ashar yaad aey to yahan PG per bhi post kar diey ..so for sure boht mistake niklein gee :blush:

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

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:yy:

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