Khuloos

[Mr.Khan]

Assalaam Alaikum


:rose :rose :rose



Chahat bhare woh alfaz, aur har lafz me Dua Mohsin,
Maqrooz kar diya hume tumhry Khuloos ne,


:rose :rose :rose

[ASK Afridi]

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wah wah......

[Mr.Khan]

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wah wah......

Shukriya :)

[thefire1]

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Walaikum Assalaam

Bohat hi khoob janab bohat hi acha intikhab-e-shaeri hay aap ka, very well done, khush rahyeh :)

[Mr.Khan]

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Walaikum Assalaam

Bohat hi khoob janab bohat hi acha intikhab-e-shaeri hay aap ka, very well done, khush rahyeh :)

Buhat Nawazish hai janab ki jo aap ne meri pasand ko itna pasand farmaya :)

[*Rida*]

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Assalaam Alaikum


:rose :rose :rose



Chahat bhare woh alfaz, aur har lafz me Dua Mohsin,
Maqrooz kar diya hume tumhry Khuloos ne,


:rose :rose :rose

yeh shair aaj main post kar nay wali thi ....waisay dont mind..... aap baishter shairooon mein gar bar kar daitay hain

maqrooz kar diya hamain kisi k khulooos nay

[thefire1]

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uffffo yeh gaRbaR tou innki poorani aadat hay har shair apnay hisaab say adjust kar laitay hain jaisay iss shaair main "Kisi Kay" ki jagah "tumharay" likha hay, darasal shaair kisi per aik waar hay shayed unhoon nay paRha nahin abhi tak... jee haan Khan sahab main unhi ki baat kar raha hoon jin kay bulaanay per bhi aap nahin jaa rahi rahay aur woh aap kay liye rastoon per nazrain bithayi intizaar kar rahi hain :)

[Mr.Khan]

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yeh shair aaj main post kar nay wali thi ....waisay dont mind..... aap baishter shairooon mein gar bar kar daitay hain

maqrooz kar diya hamain kisi k khulooos nay

ye mera qasoor thori na hai , sms bhejne walay ka qasoor hai na ye to

[Mr.Khan]

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uffffo yeh gaRbaR tou innki poorani aadat hay har shair apnay hisaab say adjust kar laitay hain jaisay iss shaair main "Kisi Kay" ki jagah "tumharay" likha hay, darasal shaair kisi per aik waar hay shayed unhoon nay paRha nahin abhi tak... jee haan Khan sahab main unhi ki baat kar raha hoon jin kay bulaanay per bhi aap nahin jaa rahi rahay aur woh aap kay liye rastoon per nazrain bithayi intizaar kar rahi hain :)

:lol

Actually advancement ka dor hai na, har cheez waqt ke saath saath change hoti ja rahi hia is liye mujhy b changes pasand hen,

Shair me jiddat paida karte rehna chahye :lol

[thefire1]

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chalain aap kehtay hain tou yeh bhi thik hi hoga Modern shaeri ki zinda misaal :)

[Mr.Khan]

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chalain aap kehtay hain tou yeh bhi thik hi hoga Modern shaeri ki zinda misaal :)

Ofcourse, Poetries are advancing by leaps & bound :lol

[thefire1]

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yes and you are playing a major role in this advancement with your creativity and adjusting it according to your requirement.... Jahan mouqa mila wahan maar dia teer nishaanay per.... :lol

[life.]

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v nice.........................

[Mr.Khan]

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yes and you are playing a major role in this advancement with your creativity and adjusting it according to your requirement.... Jahan mouqa mila wahan maar dia teer nishaanay per.... :lol

hahahahhahahhahahhahahaha

han na to aur kya :lol

[Gul]

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Ahaan !! gudd