phir chalay jana

[dil_e_nadaan]

Assalam-o- Allaikum :rose
aik ghazal meri taraf se kabul farmaye :phool:

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Phir chalay jana
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Sakoot-e-jaan ka matlab batado phir chalay jana
Ya phir sargoshian dil ki suna do phir chalay jana
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Jo mera aur tumhara waqt guzra hansnay ronay may
Usay puri tarha se tum bhulado phir chalay jana
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Ye saray pair poday tum bin kai raat jagay hai
Tum aakay ek baar inko sulado phir chalay jana
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Kisi ko chahne ka aur kisi se chahay janay ka
Jo hai ahsaas tum usko bhulado phir chalay jana
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Bus ik murda hansi se apnay ashko ko chupanay ka
Jo fun aata hai tum ko, wo sikhado phir chalay jana
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Wo jo ik lafz-e-ulfat hai, juda hai apnay maani se
Bus in alfaz-o-mani ko milado phir chalay jana
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Jo kehte kahte ruk gaye, un sari bato ki
Sama'at ko talab hai wo suna do phir chalay jana
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Na janay kiu hai lakin dekhne ki tum ko aadat hai
Meri ye be-waja aadat chura do phir chalay jana
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Merey in roz-o-shab ka ek fakat unwan bus tum ho
Mujhe tum doosra unwan lado phir chalay jana
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Pyar ki koshish, ay Khuda, na jaye raigan
Mujhe is sabr ka kuch phal dila do phir chalay jana..

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take care
khsuh rehye :dua
Allah Haffiz :rose

[ummid]

Re: phir chalay jana

ghazal acchi hai...:thmbup:
lakeen yeh baar baar aap jane ki baat kyun ker rahi hai....:cc:
Ager us bechare ko na-jana ho tu???:khi:
any ways gazal ke liye shukriya..:phool:

[tauseeftariq]

Re: phir chalay jana

bahot umda...aapkaa yeh kalaam dekh kar yeh lines yaad aa gaiiN:

chale jaanaa, zaraa Thero!
kisii kaa dam nikaltaa hai
yeh manzar dekh kar jaanaa

chale jaanaa, zaraa Thehro!

shukria share karne ke liye :rose

lagtaa hai app bhi OLD SONGS bhut suntey hain...:lol
mujy bhi yahi song yaad aya thaa..:lol

[tauseeftariq]

Re: phir chalay jana

:phool: nice ghazal hai:phool: ..
app ke apni lekhi howi hai ya kisi aur shair ka kalaam hai
any waz... achi hai
inpage main lekh ker post ker din tu maza a jay..

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: phir chalay jana

Adaab!!!
Boahat umdah ghazal hai ....lekin yun to mat kahiey un becharay/Bechari ko ..kion bhej rahay hain ..
yun kahiey unhein k
Abhi na jaao Chhor ker
K dil abhi bhara nahin:)
anyways nice sharing ....Thanks for sharing:rose

[Masood]

Re: phir chalay jana

Bohat zabardast - bohat achhi lagi yeh ghazal - share karney ka shukriyah :)

[Aania]

Re: phir chalay jana

nice though... :)

[*Rida*]

Re: phir chalay jana

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose

buht khoooob

buht zabardast:)

[*Rida*]

Re: phir chalay jana

Adaab!!!
Boahat umdah ghazal hai ....lekin yun to mat kahiey un becharay/Bechari ko ..kion bhej rahay hain ..
yun kahiey unhein k
Abhi na jaao Chhor ker
K dil abhi bhara nahin:)
anyways nice sharing ....Thanks for sharing:rose

mairay khayal main il-enadaan nay bhaijna nahin chaha hai balkay bahanay say rokna chaha hai.... itna kuch poch rahay hain batanay main time lagay ga :khi:
aur buht kuch tu is main aisa hai jo ho nahin sakta ya hona buht mushkil hai
well buht zabardast sharing hai buht achi lagi...