*@*Kahi uske jaisa Aalam-e-shabaab naa dekha*@*

[Diggaj]

Aadaab Pyare dosto

Pegham par naya hu...aur likhne mein bhi chhota bachha isliye kahi galati hoto pyaar se bata dijiyega...shukriya:)

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Humne Gulshan mein aesa Gulab naa dekha
Kahi uske jaisa Aalam-e-shabaab naa dekha


Roshan hai ye jaha uske rang roop k ujalo se
maine kabhi zamee par mahtaab naa dekha


Zulafe hai uski ya hai sawan ki kaali ghataye
Bin barish k aesa Qaus-e-qazah naa dekha


Navard-e-ishq mein kya hua kya bataye hum
kabhi humne yu khud ko harata naa dekha


Paya hai pyaar uska aur sab kuch khoya hai
Fir bhi maine mujh jaisa Zaradaar naa dekha


Humne Gulshan mein aesa Gulab naa dekha
Kahi humne aesa Aalam-e-shabaab naa dekha

[Shaim]

Re: *@*Kahi uske jaisa Aalam-e-shabaab naa dekha*@*

Buhaat acchi poem share ki aapney....:thmbup: :thmbup:
really nice:salam:
per urdu thoori mushkil hai:cc:
anyhow KEEP SHARING:lpop:

[Diggaj]

Re: *@*Kahi uske jaisa Aalam-e-shabaab naa dekha*@*

Bhai humne hi likhi hai..Jante hai galatiya ho sakti hai ishme..Take care

Buhaat acchi poem share ki aapney....:thmbup: :thmbup:
really nice:salam:
per urdu thoori mushkil hai:cc:
anyhow KEEP SHARING:lpop:

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: *@*Kahi uske jaisa Aalam-e-shabaab naa dekha*@*

nice one

[Shaim]

Re: *@*Kahi uske jaisa Aalam-e-shabaab naa dekha*@*

Bhai humne hi likhi hai..Jante hai galatiya ho sakti hai ishme..Take care

Bhai apne buhat accha likha:thmbup:
per Navard-e-ishq ka matlab bata dain plz:blush:

[Diggaj]

Re: *@*Kahi uske jaisa Aalam-e-shabaab naa dekha*@*

Bhai mere aap nahi jante kya?

Navard-e-ishq ....... Battle of love....pyaari ki ladai

Bhai apne buhat accha likha:thmbup:
per Navard-e-ishq ka matlab bata dain plz:blush:

[Diggaj]

Re: *@*Kahi uske jaisa Aalam-e-shabaab naa dekha*@*

Shukriya khalil ji ki aapne mere ish kalaam ko padha

nice one

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: *@*Kahi uske jaisa Aalam-e-shabaab naa dekha*@*

Shukriya khalil ji ki aapne mere ish kalaam ko padha

:welcome:

[Shaim]

Re: *@*Kahi uske jaisa Aalam-e-shabaab naa dekha*@*

Bhai mere aap nahi jante kya?

Navard-e-ishq ....... Battle of love....pyaari ki ladai

Me ko nahi pata tha bhai:blush:
ab pata chal gaya thx:lpop:

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: *@*Kahi uske jaisa Aalam-e-shabaab naa dekha*@*

Asslam_O_Alikum WR WB

Bhot umda likha hay .. bhot nice words use kya hay ...

N welcome here ..

per Dear ! aap ki agr ya apni likhi hui hay to aap is ko section Mein Shair To Nahi .. mein post kary aur agr ksii aur ki to aap is ko dosry section main ..

Ya section Poetry ka nahi hay ..

FeaamnAllah

[*Hala*]

Re: *@*Kahi uske jaisa Aalam-e-shabaab naa dekha*@*

buht khubsuratt lekhaa hai ..... thanks for shairng ...be happy always:rose

[Diggaj]

Re: *@*Kahi uske jaisa Aalam-e-shabaab naa dekha*@*

Aadaab

main maafi chahunga naya hu ish wajah se galati ho gayi...agar ho sake to move kara dijiyega

shukriya

Diggaj

Asslam_O_Alikum WR WB

Bhot umda likha hay .. bhot nice words use kya hay ...

N welcome here ..

per Dear ! aap ki agr ya apni likhi hui hay to aap is ko section Mein Shair To Nahi .. mein post kary aur agr ksii aur ki to aap is ko dosry section main ..

Ya section Poetry ka nahi hay ..

FeaamnAllah

[Diggaj]

Re: *@*Kahi uske jaisa Aalam-e-shabaab naa dekha*@*

Aadaab

ye likha humne hi hai par galati se yaha post kar diya


shukriya pasand karne k liye


Diggaj

buht khubsuratt lekhaa hai ..... thanks for shairng ...be happy always:rose

[*Hala*]

Re: *@*Kahi uske jaisa Aalam-e-shabaab naa dekha*@*

Aadaab

ye likha humne hi hai par galati se yaha post kar diya


shukriya pasand karne k liye


Diggaj

galati se :cc:

kyon apna lekhaa hoaa hum sab ki sat share nahi karti kiaa :rose

[Diggaj]

Re: *@*Kahi uske jaisa Aalam-e-shabaab naa dekha*@*

Bikul sahi kaha hala ji aapne

Shukriyah

galati se :cc:

kyon apna lekhaa hoaa hum sab ki sat share nahi karti kiaa :rose