Neend min ayi hoi muskan.

[pErIsH_BoY]

Sote min bhi.

Chehre ko aanchal se chupaye rehti hon.

Dar lagta he.

Palkon ki halki si larzish.

Honton ki mohoom si junbish.

Galon par reh reh kar utarne wali dhanak.

Lahoo min chaand rachati.

Is nanhi si khushi ka nam na le le.

Neend min ayi hoi muskan.

Kisi se dil ki bat na keh de.

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[Aslam1981]

Re: Neend min ayi hoi muskan.

Nice

Poem achi hai, per behtar hota, animation ke bina hi paish kiya jata :think

Fun ko paish karna bhi aik fun hai. achi cheez galat andaz mein paish ki jaye to wo aapna muqaam kho deti hai.

[Meh-vish]

Re: Neend min ayi hoi muskan.

bahut khoob..

[pErIsH_BoY]

Re: Neend min ayi hoi muskan.