Tumhen bakhsh di dil pay hukmrani or kia detay,

[T@nHA.D!L]

Tumhen bakhsh di dil pay hukmrani or kia detay,

Yehi thi bus humari raj dhani or kia detay,

Sitarey tor kar lana faqt batain hain zamaney ki,
...
Hum ney to tmhary naam likh di zindagani or kia detay,

tm hum say mangta tha umar ka ik haseen hissa,

Na detay tmhy hum apni jawani or kia detay,

Bichartey waqt tmhy ik na ik tohfa to dena tha,

Humarey pas tha aankhon mai pani or kia detay.

[Baniaz Khan]

Re: Tumhen bakhsh di dil pay hukmrani or kia detay,

bhai poetry tou boht achi hai magar urdu mein hoti tou aor maza ata

[ifrah]

Re: Tumhen bakhsh di dil pay hukmrani or kia detay,

mjhey ye poetry bht pasand i hai... me poetries bht pasand krti hun lekin jis poetry me gila ho dursey se jese tumhey kia detey wo bht pasand ati hain ku k aj kal k zamaney me jo dhokey miltey hain... logon se b shikwa na he kia jae to thk hai to apna gham khatam krney k liye insaan usay apni poetry me likh day..... great work on it...........

[Mr.Khan]

Re: Tumhen bakhsh di dil pay hukmrani or kia detay,

Bichartey waqt tmhy ik na ik tohfa to dena tha,
Humarey pas tha aankhon mai pani or kia detay.

Wah buhat khoob

[T@nHA.D!L]

Re: Tumhen bakhsh di dil pay hukmrani or kia detay,

Thankssssssssssssss